the bar chart illustrate the number of tourists visit London museums
The given bar chart illustrate the popularity of 4 museums in London a by the amount of tourists visited these places in the 5-year period
Overall, the peak of four locations was observed in August, while the lowest numbers were obtained in June and December
The first 2 months witnessed a stabilize number of visitors to four surveyed locations. History, British and Science Museums were the most popular choices, attracting about 400000 guests in both June and July. Nonetheless, only 200000 guests visited National Museum, making it the least favorable option
The next three months revealed dramatic changes. History,British and National museums soared in popularity in August, attracting around 600000, 700000, and 300000 visitors, respectively, while Science museum observed no change in its visitor traffic. However, after the peak of the season passed, that figure of History, British and National museums quickly deteriorated, dropping down to 200000, 400000 and under 200000 guests in December. Whild Science museum’s popularity surged in September, with 500000 guests, the number of visitors dropped to about 300000 in December
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 6, column 30, Rule ID: A_INFINITVE[1]
Message: Probably a wrong construction: a/the + infinitive
...ecember The first 2 months witnessed a stabilize number of visitors to four surveyed loc...
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Line 8, column 57, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , British
...onths revealed dramatic changes. History,British and National museums soared in populari...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, however, nonetheless, so, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 7.0 43% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 6.8 103% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.15609756098 32% => OK
Pronoun: 4.0 5.60731707317 71% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 33.7804878049 86% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.97073170732 76% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 982.0 965.302439024 102% => OK
No of words: 174.0 196.424390244 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.64367816092 4.92477711251 115% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.63192868298 3.73543355544 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.68567344533 2.65546596893 101% => OK
Unique words: 107.0 106.607317073 100% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.614942528736 0.547539520022 112% => OK
syllable_count: 277.2 283.868780488 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.45097560976 110% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 5.0 4.33902439024 115% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.07073170732 280% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 6.0 8.94146341463 67% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 29.0 22.4926829268 129% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 77.6482453118 43.030603864 180% => OK
Chars per sentence: 163.666666667 112.824112599 145% => OK
Words per sentence: 29.0 22.9334400587 126% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.33333333333 5.23603664747 121% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 1.69756097561 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 3.70975609756 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.09268292683 24% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.284516927198 0.215688989381 132% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.123779705927 0.103423049105 120% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.116628997926 0.0843802449381 138% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.199422363807 0.15604864568 128% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.182829143156 0.0819641961636 223% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 19.6 13.2329268293 148% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.04 61.2550243902 69% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.6 10.3012195122 142% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 16.02 11.4140731707 140% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.61 8.06136585366 119% => OK
difficult_words: 50.0 40.7170731707 123% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 18.0 11.4329268293 157% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.6 10.9970731707 124% => OK
text_standard: 20.0 11.0658536585 181% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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