You have recently started work in a new company.
Write a letter to an English-speaking friend. In your letter
explain why you changed jobs
describe your new job
tell him/her your other news
Dear Jennifer,
Although it has been a long a time hearing back from you, but I hope you are doing well. The reason for writing this letter is that I have a good news. As you know, I have been looking for a new job and I am glad to tell you that I finally become successful in finding a better post.
The new role offered by my company is the position for branch manager. Since I have completed my MBA recently, this organization was seeking for candidate with vast experience in radiology and administrative skills. Hence, keeping in view my qualification and experience, they considered me a suitable candidate for this position. this new opportunity would be a great chance for offering me to nourish my skills. another positive point for this job was that I have to work only for regular shifts, I mean 9:00 am - 5:00 pm. my previous job was quite hectic, as I had to work in shifts.
Ah! I forgot to tell you another thing that I have recently shifted my residence.I moved to a new apartment and luckily, this accommodation is near to my new office. When I had been there for first visit, it mesmerised me and I couldn't resist to transfer in this resort. it actually comes with fully furnished two bedrooms with attached bathroom, and an open kitchen with spacious lounge.
Last but not the least, pay my regards to your family and I am hoping to see you soon at my new accommodation!
Best wishes,
Maria
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 140, Rule ID: A_UNCOUNTABLE[3]
Message: Uncountable nouns are usually not used with an indefinite article. Use simply 'good news'.
Suggestion: good news
... for writing this letter is that I have a good news. As you know, I have been looking for a...
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Line 3, column 331, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: This
...a suitable candidate for this position. this new opportunity would be a great chance...
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Line 3, column 414, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Another
...e for offering me to nourish my skills. another positive point for this job was that I ...
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Line 3, column 587, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ite hectic, as I had to work in shifts. Ah! I forgot to tell you another thing t...
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Line 5, column 82, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: I
...at I have recently shifted my residence.I moved to a new apartment and luckily, t...
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Line 5, column 229, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: couldn't
...for first visit, it mesmerised me and I couldnt resist to transfer in this resort. it a...
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Line 5, column 272, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: It
...ldnt resist to transfer in this resort. it actually comes with fully furnished two...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, but, finally, first, hence, if, look, so, well, another thing, i mean, you know
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 7.48453608247 147% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 4.92783505155 20% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 5.05154639175 178% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.03092783505 165% => OK
Pronoun: 49.0 32.9175257732 149% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 23.0 26.3917525773 87% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 3.85567010309 259% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1163.0 937.175257732 124% => OK
No of words: 257.0 206.0 125% => OK
Chars per words: 4.52529182879 4.54256449028 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.00390054096 3.78020617076 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.69059538531 2.54303337028 106% => OK
Unique words: 153.0 127.690721649 120% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.5953307393 0.622605031667 96% => OK
syllable_count: 360.9 290.88556701 124% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 9.13402061856 120% => OK
Article: 2.0 0.824742268041 243% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 5.0 1.83505154639 272% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.463917525773 431% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6804123711 103% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 16.3608247423 116% => OK
Sentence length SD: 30.7511485329 44.8134815571 69% => OK
Chars per sentence: 89.4615384615 76.5299724578 117% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.7692307692 16.8248392259 118% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.84615384615 4.34317383033 158% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 2.54639175258 275% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 7.41237113402 94% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.94845360825 152% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.219193451584 0.216113520407 101% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0817335942397 0.0766984524023 107% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0646455897771 0.0603063233224 107% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.146997448339 0.12726935374 116% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0638979547418 0.0580467560999 110% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.8 8.37731958763 117% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 69.11 70.7449484536 98% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.3 7.45979381443 111% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.99 8.71597938144 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.9 7.59969072165 104% => OK
difficult_words: 54.0 41.2886597938 131% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 8.62886597938 93% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 8.54432989691 112% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 87.0786516854 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.75 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.