You have recently started work in a new company.
Write a letter to an English-speaking friend. In your letter
Explain why you changed jobs
describe your new job
tell him/her your other news
Dear Jaya,
Hope you are doing awesome!
I’m writing to let you that I have left my previous firm and started to work with new company as a sales executive.
It’s been two weeks now that I have started working with Tech Mahindra. I was willing to inform you before starting the job hunt, but I thought of directly giving you the good news. As you are aware the previous sales assistant role in Tata company was getting extremely hectic. Since last month, I was working for more than 16 hours in a week. On top of that, weekends were working as well. So, finally I decided to quit.
Right now I have joined as a senior sales executive in Tech Mahindra, Bengaluru Office. The office is so cool! There’s a stress buster area which has all the play stations, table tennis and Carrom. Can you be getting stressed out while working in such environment? I just love this place. In terms of work, it is also quite organized with experienced management.
I have one more news for you. I have a pet now, It’s a Persian Cat. I was walking around and found her on the footpath. I filed a missing complaint for her, but no response from its owner. So I decided to pet her. Now I feel like I have a small baby. You should come by to meet her. I have named her Sheru. Isn’t that a lovely name?
Hope to meet you soon.
Best Regards,
Firdous
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 183, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “As” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...t of directly giving you the good news. As you are aware the previous sales assist...
^^
Line 11, column 69, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
.... I have a pet now, It’s a Persian Cat. I was walking around and found her on the...
^
Line 11, column 121, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...g around and found her on the footpath. I filed a missing complaint for her, but ...
^
Line 16, column 8, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...meet you soon. Best Regards, Firdous
^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, so, well, while, i feel, on top of that
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 7.48453608247 147% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 4.92783505155 41% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 5.05154639175 99% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.03092783505 165% => OK
Pronoun: 41.0 32.9175257732 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 26.0 26.3917525773 99% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.85567010309 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1110.0 937.175257732 118% => OK
No of words: 251.0 206.0 122% => OK
Chars per words: 4.42231075697 4.54256449028 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.98032404683 3.78020617076 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.28469990439 2.54303337028 90% => OK
Unique words: 159.0 127.690721649 125% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.633466135458 0.622605031667 102% => OK
syllable_count: 340.2 290.88556701 117% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 13.0 9.13402061856 142% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.463917525773 431% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 1.44329896907 208% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 23.0 12.6804123711 181% => OK
Sentence length: 10.0 16.3608247423 61% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 35.9382478142 44.8134815571 80% => OK
Chars per sentence: 48.2608695652 76.5299724578 63% => OK
Words per sentence: 10.9130434783 16.8248392259 65% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.5652173913 4.34317383033 59% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.29896907216 140% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 4.0 2.54639175258 157% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 7.41237113402 121% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 12.0 3.94845360825 304% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.228801538002 0.216113520407 106% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0582719368824 0.0766984524023 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0583010872334 0.0603063233224 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.123385804251 0.12726935374 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0551805850175 0.0580467560999 95% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 4.8 8.37731958763 57% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 78.25 70.7449484536 111% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 4.8 7.45979381443 64% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.17 8.71597938144 82% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.09 7.59969072165 93% => OK
difficult_words: 47.0 41.2886597938 114% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 8.62886597938 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 6.0 8.54432989691 70% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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