Many people believe that it is easier to have a healthy lifestyle in the countryside. Others believe that there are health benefits of living in cities. Discuss both views and give your opinions.
It is true that inhabitants in rural areas find it is easier to lead a healthy way of life while others argue that urban citizens receive more health benefits, I believe that there are more beneficial healthy in the countryside.
On the one hand, it is undeniable fact that metropolises provide with abundant of amenities that improve healthcare. Firstly, cities offer the best healthcare in the face of exacerbating environmental conditions. Specifically, car emissions and littering contaminate the air and the water supply, which leads to the outbreak of many respiratory diseases such as lung cancer, for which scientists have yet found a remedy. However, the cities are home to many advanced hospitals with top-tier professional practitioners, so that urban citizens have accessed to these resources being available. In addition, urban inhabitants easily access the service of the gym and medical centers, which help to create ideal conditions to focus on their healthy lifestyle.
On the other hand, I believe that settling down in the countryside has more important benefits to health. Firstly, remote areas can decrease the rate of catching psychological problems such as stress and depression. In cities, people are living in the modern world, where human beings constantly make efforts to compete with others in the workplace, so those who live in the countryside not tend to do that. Moreover, people of villages live much nearer to nature, and so have many chances to eat fresh foods and vegetables collected directly from gardens. In contrast, foods, fruits, and vegetables in cities are often stored and mixed with preservatives and can cause serious harm to the health.
In conclusion, despite the undeniable beneficial health of living in the city, I firmly hold the view that people living in rural areas have a healthier lifestyle.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 17, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...hy in the countryside. On the one hand, it is undeniable fact that metropolises ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, however, if, moreover, so, while, in addition, in conclusion, in contrast, such as, it is true, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 14.0 7.30460921844 192% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 41.998997996 105% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 8.3376753507 12% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1559.0 1615.20841683 97% => OK
No of words: 296.0 315.596192385 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.26689189189 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.14784890444 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.89569204408 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 174.0 176.041082164 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.587837837838 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 491.4 506.74238477 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 40.3815139224 49.4020404114 82% => OK
Chars per sentence: 129.916666667 106.682146367 122% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.6666666667 20.7667163134 119% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.75 7.06120827912 152% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.290822546284 0.244688304435 119% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0903255437567 0.084324248473 107% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0767816717159 0.0667982634062 115% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.165989582555 0.151304729494 110% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.054682616766 0.056905535591 96% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.7 13.0946893788 120% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 38.66 50.2224549098 77% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 11.3001002004 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.58 12.4159519038 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.36 8.58950901804 109% => OK
difficult_words: 85.0 78.4519038076 108% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.0 9.78957915832 153% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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