You have recently moved to a different location Write a letter to an english speaking friend In your letter explain why you have moved describe the new house invite your friend to come and visit
Dear Monica
It's been a few months since the last time we met at the national homebrewers convention. I am writing you to tell you about my recent move to the coast. Remember when we were in college and we used to dream about living beside the beach. Well, last week I made it a reality by buying a newly renovated beachside three-bedroom house.
Living just a few steps by the beach is what I have always wanted and now it's a reality. The house has three bedrooms a big open kitchen and a private cinema. you know how much I love movies but, what I enjoy the most is the view. I'm sure you are going to love it. Furthermore, the house is in a very quiet neighborhood with lots of amenities to visit and at least three schools are nearby.
I was wondering If you will be able to visit me here after this year's convention is over. Sadly, I won't be able to attend this year because I've already spent all of my holidays making the move.
So, I hope to hear from you very soon. I really miss you.
Sincerely your Carlos.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 4, column 75, Rule ID: IT_IS[17]
Message: Did you mean 'it's' (='it is') instead of 'its' (possessive pronoun)?
Suggestion: it's; it is
...ch is what I have always wanted and now its a reality. The house has three bedrooms...
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Line 4, column 160, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: You
... big open kitchen and a private cinema. you know how much I love movies but, what I...
^^^
Line 4, column 232, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: I'm
...but, what I enjoy the most is the view. Im sure you are going to love it. Furtherm...
^^
Line 6, column 65, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'years'' or 'year's'?
Suggestion: years'; year's
...ill be able to visit me here after this years convention is over. Sadly, I wont be ab...
^^^^^
Line 6, column 141, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: I've
...ont be able to attend this year because Ive already spent all of my holidays making...
^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, furthermore, if, really, so, well, at least, you know
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 7.48453608247 147% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 4.92783505155 20% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 5.05154639175 99% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.03092783505 33% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 32.9175257732 88% => OK
Preposition: 24.0 26.3917525773 91% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.85567010309 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 831.0 937.175257732 89% => OK
No of words: 196.0 206.0 95% => OK
Chars per words: 4.23979591837 4.54256449028 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.74165738677 3.78020617076 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.31686027295 2.54303337028 91% => OK
Unique words: 132.0 127.690721649 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.673469387755 0.622605031667 108% => OK
syllable_count: 264.6 290.88556701 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.13402061856 77% => OK
Article: 2.0 0.824742268041 243% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 12.6804123711 110% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 16.3608247423 86% => OK
Sentence length SD: 31.5785383074 44.8134815571 70% => OK
Chars per sentence: 59.3571428571 76.5299724578 78% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.0 16.8248392259 83% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.14285714286 4.34317383033 95% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 2.54639175258 196% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 7.41237113402 94% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.94845360825 127% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.182599436663 0.216113520407 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0622406386956 0.0766984524023 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0586415844931 0.0603063233224 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0954056662571 0.12726935374 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0128564305431 0.0580467560999 22% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 5.5 8.37731958763 66% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 74.19 70.7449484536 105% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.4 7.45979381443 86% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 6.72 8.71597938144 77% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.51 7.59969072165 86% => OK
difficult_words: 27.0 41.2886597938 65% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 8.62886597938 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 8.54432989691 89% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 8.15463917526 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.