Some people advocate death penalty for those who committed violent crimes. Others say that capital punishment is unacceptable in contemporary society.
Describe advantages and disadvantages of death penalty and give your opinion.
There are many punishments that criminals would receive when they commit violent crimes. Many argue that all violent criminals have to incur the death penalty which can easily erase all the dangerous parts out of the society. Opponents, on the other hand, capital repercussion is suggested as a method of punishment which can lower the scarcity of other discipline. This problem contains both advantages and disadvantages but I believe that death penalty can successfully bring a good benefit to a society.
To begin with, the major benefit that all the citizen and the government achieve when apply the death penalty on violent criminals is that people can live in a peaceful society. When the living environment has no violent crime, there will not appear the violent among families, school or offices which can increase people living standard. For example, many children who are affected by domestic violence state that they feel a little bit sad when their dad receive death penalty but they live in a better family due to no violent families. Besides that, apply this burdensome punishment could be an exemplary for every person who is going to commit a violent crime so that they can acknowledge and reform their life. Take myself as an example, in the past I about to punched my friend; however, I realized that it is a bad behavior so that I commit with myself to be kind with everyone in the future.
This method is good but it also has some disadvantages. This is a strike punishment for people who just have a misdemeanor that relate to violent because this kind of people are willing to reform. It is a good thing to give every person another chance to do again so that is is not necessary to kill these people. Furthermore, when apply this punishment, people might have a protest against the government because some citizen think it is excessive to publish this strategy.
All thing considered, death penalty is a good method because it absolutely erases all the criminals part from the living environment. However, there is still remain some bad comments about this discipline when the government apply to all the criminals.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, furthermore, however, if, so, still, for example, kind of, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 15.1003584229 113% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 9.8082437276 102% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 13.8261648746 51% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 24.0 11.0286738351 218% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 39.0 43.0788530466 91% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 52.1666666667 67% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.0752688172 124% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1787.0 1977.66487455 90% => OK
No of words: 363.0 407.700716846 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.92286501377 4.8611393121 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.3649236973 4.48103885553 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.63120733785 2.67179642975 98% => OK
Unique words: 175.0 212.727598566 82% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.482093663912 0.524837075471 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 569.7 618.680645161 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 9.59856630824 52% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 20.6003584229 73% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.1344086022 119% => OK
Sentence length SD: 36.4596580712 48.9658058833 74% => OK
Chars per sentence: 119.133333333 100.406767564 119% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.2 20.6045352989 117% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.4 5.45110844103 136% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.5376344086 108% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 11.8709677419 25% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 12.0 3.85842293907 311% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.88709677419 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.2611849359 0.236089414692 111% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0911111748975 0.076458572812 119% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0479799245205 0.0737576698707 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.153797592481 0.150856017488 102% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.058486253792 0.0645574589148 91% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.8 11.7677419355 117% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.12 58.1214874552 81% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 10.1575268817 125% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.55 10.9000537634 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.7 8.01818996416 96% => OK
difficult_words: 66.0 86.8835125448 76% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 10.002688172 110% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.0537634409 115% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.247311828 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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