A segment of society opines that facts on the news should be viewed in different perspectives rather than in one way. Personally, not all those information are truth- based and delivering information as well as expressing personal comments to the public are the main purposes of an article.
Misinformation is becoming more and more widespread by virtue of their appeal. Sometimes, information from editorials or compact newspapers are expressed by the writers’ views, which will prejudge the issue. Also, hoax news is extremely popular in yellow journalism where information is usually written in a different, sensational way from what it truly is, which deliberately confuses readers and attracts more views. This has been proven in a Vietnamese tabloid newspaper last month, reporting some changes for the contemporary traffic legislation, proposed by an illustrious politician. Providing pressman had not used a misleading headline and therefore, change the politician tone of voice from soft to aggressive, readers would not have misconstrued the details.
Newspaper serves two main purposes, which are updating latest news as well as demonstrating personal opinions. A daily or weekly journal usually satisfy the publicity appetite for hot news, which have been always considered to be an integral component of human life. Without newspapers, people can be ignorance about the other aspects of life such as stock markets or COVID-19 situation in this ever- changing world. Moreover, anyone from any strata can express their views about the government policy or any events, anonymously or publicly. Vietnamese national periodicals will be adding some new sections, available for people in different age brackets to demonstrate their own points or any comments about the relating issue.
To conclude, newspapers keeps people knowledgeable about the surrounding world and also encourages the freedom of expression. However, some news can be inaccurate inasmuch as it can attracts more views or the author’s subjectivity.
- Big companies sponsor sport events to advertise them selves More organisers believe that it is beneficial to the world of sports To what extent do you agree or disagree 95
- Question An increasing number of people are buying what they need online What are the advantages and disadvantages for both individuals and companies to shopping online 89
- While some people consider global warming to be the most pressing environmental problem which we have at the moment others believe that deforestation has a more devastating impact on our world Discuss both sides and give your opinion 84
- It is now possible for scientists and tourists to travel to remote natural environment such as the South Pole Do the advantages of this development outweigh the disadvantages 95
- It is often said that governments spend too much money on projects to protect wildlife while there are other problems that are more important Do you agree or disagree 89
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 139, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'this information' or 'those informations'?
Suggestion: this information; those informations
...er than in one way. Personally, not all those information are truth- based and delivering informa...
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Line 5, column 47, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[2]
Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'updating the latest'.
Suggestion: updating the latest
...per serves two main purposes, which are updating latest news as well as demonstrating personal ...
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Line 5, column 197, Rule ID: ADVERB_WORD_ORDER[8]
Message: The adverb 'always' is usually put between 'have' and 'been'.
Suggestion: have always been
... publicity appetite for hot news, which have been always considered to be an integral component ...
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Line 7, column 183, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
Message: The verb 'can' requires the base form of the verb: 'attract'
Suggestion: attract
...ws can be inaccurate inasmuch as it can attracts more views or the author’s subjectivity...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, however, if, moreover, so, therefore, well, such as, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 9.0 24.0651302605 37% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 41.998997996 76% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1733.0 1615.20841683 107% => OK
No of words: 308.0 315.596192385 98% => OK
Chars per words: 5.62662337662 5.12529762239 110% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.18926351222 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.04153203211 2.80592935109 108% => OK
Unique words: 195.0 176.041082164 111% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.633116883117 0.561755894193 113% => OK
syllable_count: 540.0 506.74238477 107% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 35.3019771661 49.4020404114 71% => OK
Chars per sentence: 123.785714286 106.682146367 116% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.0 20.7667163134 106% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.92857142857 7.06120827912 70% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.156677785263 0.244688304435 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.053379876321 0.084324248473 63% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0476666251044 0.0667982634062 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.104397645974 0.151304729494 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0395686985562 0.056905535591 70% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.1 13.0946893788 123% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 32.22 50.2224549098 64% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.2 11.3001002004 126% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.37 12.4159519038 124% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.11 8.58950901804 118% => OK
difficult_words: 105.0 78.4519038076 134% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.5 9.78957915832 128% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.