It is true that excessive fishing all over the world has led to the extinction of different kinds of animal and put people at risk. There are several reasons for this problems and various measures could be taken to improve the situation.
There are numerous reasons for over-fishing. This issue is caused by the increasing demand for fish as food. Nowadays, the population around the world has grown dramatically and this brings about the rising of over-fishing to fulfill human’s demand of food. One rationale that can be given to explain why this is happening is that there are so many illegal methods to catch fish such as dynamite fishing, using electric nets,… Those activities are more efficient, quicker and easier for fishermen and as a result, they would abuse it which lead to over-fishing.
Fortunately, several concrete steps could be taken to tackle this problem. First, the government could provide people with various kinds of food such as beef, pork,… to reduce the excessive fishing. In order to hold back the over-fishing, one more solution could be considered is that government should enforce more strict laws to ban illegal activities to catch fish. Besides, increasing taxes on huge fishing companies could also be a possible way to deal with this issue.
In conclusion, it is clear that there are various reasons for over-fishing; however, different steps could be taken to solve the problem.
- The number of people who are at risk of serious health problems due to being overweight is increasing What is the reason for the growth in overweight people in society How can this problem be solved 84
- Some people think that it would be better for large companies and industry to move to regional areas outside large urban centers Do you think the advantages outweigh the disadvantages 80
- Overfishing of the world s oceans threatens many species with extinction and is putting the livelihood of millions of people around the world at risk What are the causes of this problem and what can be done to prevent it from happening 63
- More and more newspapers and news channels are using photographs to support their news articles and stories Some people think photographs are not a reliable source of news while others consider photographs to be irrefutable Discuss both sides and give you 84
- Some people think that in order to solve traffic and transportation problems people should be encouraged to live in cities rather than in suburbs or at countryside To what extent do you agree or disagree 92
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Did you mean 'these'?
Suggestion: these
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Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , …
...as dynamite fishing, using electric nets,… Those activities are more efficient, qu...
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Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , …
...various kinds of food such as beef, pork,… to reduce the excessive fishing. In ord...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, first, however, if, so, in conclusion, such as, as a result, it is true
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 41.998997996 79% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1199.0 1615.20841683 74% => OK
No of words: 234.0 315.596192385 74% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.12393162393 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.91114542567 4.20363070211 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.70488515131 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 132.0 176.041082164 75% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.564102564103 0.561755894193 100% => OK
syllable_count: 362.7 506.74238477 72% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 66.6387820471 49.4020404114 135% => OK
Chars per sentence: 109.0 106.682146367 102% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.2727272727 20.7667163134 102% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.81818181818 7.06120827912 111% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.17497638391 0.244688304435 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0747636877587 0.084324248473 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0490854718882 0.0667982634062 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.117708994806 0.151304729494 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0597979288 0.056905535591 105% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.3 13.0946893788 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 50.2224549098 100% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.42 12.4159519038 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.05 8.58950901804 94% => OK
difficult_words: 50.0 78.4519038076 64% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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