While some folks believe more panaceas should be needed to drop-off crime rate, others think that currently antisocial activities are being tackled in a effective way. In forthcoming paragraphs, I will not only discuss above mentioned views but also give my own perspective.
To initiate, some masses like myself deem, actions against offences should be intensified as in this era, with the help of contemporary gadgets cyber crime is in inclining at high peaks which is resulting into financial loss of entrepreneurs and normal public. Hackers, for example, hacks bank accounts of people and transfer funds to other accounts. Furthermore, working women are not safe as they get abducted by criminals and get raped by them which is a brutal thing which one human could do to another. To is exemplify, a girl in Delhi, India was kidnapped by six guys on the road then raped and slew brutally by them three years ago. Thus, there is a need of more action to eradicate the problems like above mentioned.
In contrast, various camps are being organised by concerned authorities in a detention centres to aware antisocial activists about their bad deeds and to take them back on right path. In addition to this, because of more job opportunities, offence rate is declining which consequently paves the way to solve crime effectively. Thus, to some extent crime in some parts of the world is diminishing however, except western countries, nations in Asia and in South Africa are victims of this problem.
It can be concluded, spy things such as trackers and illegal sites should be banned by higher authorities and stringent punishment should be given to criminals so that no one could dare to commit crime.
- Families who do not send their children to government financed schools should not be required to pay taxes that support universal education To what extent do you agree or disagree 56
- Nowadays technology is increasingly being used to monitor what people are saying and doing for example through cellphone tracking and security cameras In many case theh people being monitored are unaware that this is happening Do you think the advantages 78
- Some people think personal happiness is closely related to economic success while others believe that it depends on other factors Discuss both views and give your opinion 89
- In some countries an increasing number of people are suffering from health problems as a result of eating too much fast food It is therefore necessary for governments to impose a higher tax on this kind of food To what extend do you agree or disagree with 78
- Some people choose to eat no fish or meat They believe that this is not better for your own health but also benefits the world as whole Discuss these view and give your own opinion 68
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 149, Rule ID: IN_A_X_MANNER[1]
Message: Consider replacing "in a effective way" with adverb for "effective"; eg, "in a hasty manner" with "hastily".
...antisocial activities are being tackled in a effective way. In forthcoming paragraphs, I will not ...
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Line 1, column 152, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
...isocial activities are being tackled in a effective way. In forthcoming paragraph...
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Line 3, column 515, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'exemplified'.
Suggestion: exemplified
...ch one human could do to another. To is exemplify, a girl in Delhi, India was kidnapped b...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, furthermore, however, if, so, then, thus, while, for example, in addition, in contrast, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 13.1623246493 144% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 14.0 24.0651302605 58% => OK
Preposition: 49.0 41.998997996 117% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1426.0 1615.20841683 88% => OK
No of words: 285.0 315.596192385 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.00350877193 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.10876417139 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.74058223971 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 191.0 176.041082164 108% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.670175438596 0.561755894193 119% => OK
syllable_count: 444.6 506.74238477 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 9.0 4.76152304609 189% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 49.4043863278 49.4020404114 100% => OK
Chars per sentence: 129.636363636 106.682146367 122% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.9090909091 20.7667163134 125% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.9090909091 7.06120827912 154% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 8.67935871743 12% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.9879759519 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.317496989921 0.244688304435 130% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.101008814759 0.084324248473 120% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.103252569181 0.0667982634062 155% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.200002125011 0.151304729494 132% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.103494165227 0.056905535591 182% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.1 13.0946893788 115% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 46.1 50.2224549098 92% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.0 11.3001002004 115% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.02 12.4159519038 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.7 8.58950901804 113% => OK
difficult_words: 87.0 78.4519038076 111% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.78957915832 143% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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