Task 2
Indeed, it is a fact, trend of fast food is inclining day by day around the world. Although it pave the way to variety of ailments, consumption of fast food in few nations by individuals is not dropping off. I partially agree with this trend as to some extent it is advantageous for folks’ and I will be expounding this notion in forthcoming paragraphs.
First of all, obesity is a weighty problem caused by junk food to human beings because western food contain tremendous fat ingredients and dinky amount of carbohydrates or proteins. In addition to this, because of heavy ingredients in Chinese food, digestive system of humans body faces problem to digest or emit food from body. To exemplify, according to doctors’ research, fast food digest in our body after 48 hours which means two days. Ergo, junk food making folks’ to suffer.
Besides demerits of fast food, there is an existence of merits. Fast food offers employment opportunities as there are umpteen restaurants, cafe’s and shops of burgers, pizzas etcetera. For instance, McDonalds is an eminent organisation of fast food. Moreover, if these restaurants will be shut down by high authorities then there could be an inclement in unemployment rate which would further increase crime rate. For instance, due to lack of job opportunities, youngsters commit offences to run their house.
It can be concluded, instead of banning fast food completely, high authorities could set a limit on import or export so that masses could not consume it more and get affected by ailments.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 96, Rule ID: IT_VBZ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'paves'?
Suggestion: paves
...ay by day around the world. Although it pave the way to variety of ailments, consump...
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Line 5, column 282, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'faces'' or 'fax's'?
Suggestion: faces'; fax's
...e food, digestive system of humans body faces problem to digest or emit food from bod...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, first, if, moreover, so, then, as to, for instance, in addition, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 14.0 24.0651302605 58% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1309.0 1615.20841683 81% => OK
No of words: 258.0 315.596192385 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.07364341085 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.00778971557 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.90481832013 2.80592935109 104% => OK
Unique words: 166.0 176.041082164 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.643410852713 0.561755894193 115% => OK
syllable_count: 386.1 506.74238477 76% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.2311036777 49.4020404114 90% => OK
Chars per sentence: 100.692307692 106.682146367 94% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.8461538462 20.7667163134 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.61538461538 7.06120827912 94% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.25525308397 0.244688304435 104% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0964345688144 0.084324248473 114% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0462686462017 0.0667982634062 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.140765015736 0.151304729494 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0501825996388 0.056905535591 88% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.4 13.0946893788 95% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 50.2224549098 121% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.13 12.4159519038 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.41 8.58950901804 110% => OK
difficult_words: 79.0 78.4519038076 101% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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