In some countries more people choose to live alone or by themselves in recent years why is this the case is it a positive or negative development for the society?
It is an undeniable fact that, in millennium days, people are more likely to live alone, especially youngsters. In this essay, I will discuss the reasons behind the situation, also its positive and negative influence on the society
There are several reasons why people prefer to live alone, nowadays. Firstly, people want to live their life with the freedom. What I mean to say by this is that, these days, we lived in a global village instead of big planet earth, everyone is connected with each other, with the help of the internet. Therefore, people are exposed to different nations culture, also wants to adopt it, but they are restricted by their older tradition and older member of the family, because of this they moved to different nation or state to live a life without any restriction, and do whatever they want to without giving answer to anyone. According to one survey, in India, 23% of Indians are lived alone to follow the modern trend and western culture.
It has both positive and negative impact on the society. To begin with the positive side, it will help to build some skills. By this I mean, when a person leaves alone, then he has to solve problem by themselves, it would help to boost the confidence, also it is proven that community with the confidence people, have a high chance to get success in the future. It has a negative impact, also. It would lead to health barriers. In other words, it is seen that, people who live by themselves feel loneliness, also suffer from homesickness, it would lead to a health hurdle, such as headaches, overweight, underweight and many more. It is believed by some that, with the unhealthy people, community will find difficulties to get success in the upcoming years.
In conclusion, I reiterate that, the freedom is the main reason behind jwhy people choose to live by themselves. It has a positive influence on the society, as it will help to increase the confidence of people, however it has drawback also, it would be created health barriers, such as obesity, headaches and much more.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: 'Also' is not used at the end of the sentence. Use 'as well' instead.
Suggestion: as well
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, however, if, so, then, therefore, as to, i mean, in conclusion, such as, in other words, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 41.0 24.0651302605 170% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 57.0 41.998997996 136% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1706.0 1615.20841683 106% => OK
No of words: 356.0 315.596192385 113% => OK
Chars per words: 4.79213483146 5.12529762239 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.34372677135 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.58844923375 2.80592935109 92% => OK
Unique words: 187.0 176.041082164 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.525280898876 0.561755894193 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 540.0 506.74238477 107% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 15.0 5.43587174349 276% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 11.0 4.76152304609 231% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 81.3485231717 49.4020404114 165% => OK
Chars per sentence: 113.733333333 106.682146367 107% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.7333333333 20.7667163134 114% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.6 7.06120827912 122% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.9879759519 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.23261740202 0.244688304435 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0803644073076 0.084324248473 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0490731597767 0.0667982634062 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.145434064371 0.151304729494 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0300081562847 0.056905535591 53% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.0 13.0946893788 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 56.59 50.2224549098 113% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.8 12.4159519038 87% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.33 8.58950901804 97% => OK
difficult_words: 80.0 78.4519038076 102% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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