Some people say that with the new technology there is no need to develop handwriting skills anymore. Others believe that it is still necessary to teach handwriting. Discuss both these views and give your opinion.
In today’s era of modern technology, there exists an opinion that hand writing skill is no need to be preserved and developed. Others; however, believe that nothing can replace the importance of handwriting. In this essay, I am going to analyze both views before stating my personal perspective.
On the one hand, it is reasonable why skills related to using handwriting are less frequent nowadays. This is because of modern technology. It is much more convenient to email to someone than writing a letter. For example, the employees can send an email attachment to their customers to discuss with them online if they cannot meet face to face. In addition, the recipients will get the information sooner instead of wasting a long time of waiting due to the fact that handwritten letter often takes several days to be delivered. Therefore, it can interrupt the work’s fluency.
On the other hand, many people argue that there is no alternative to handwriting skills. Firstly, handwriting is needed to preserve in order to remain the ethnic culture of each country which has been faded day by day. As handwriting reflects the whole national development process, protecting and promoting it is a way to show our appreciation to the previous generations’ contribution to the betterment of the country. In addition, handwritten records like letters are more likely to be kept and re-read, perhaps several times, because it may contain important contents or a meaningful memory to the recipient. For example, teenagers often write a postcard to give their friends some best wishes on their birthday.
In my opinion, I believe that handwriting is a very vital skill to learn because it is the outset of education. No children in the word know how to use computer to text before they can write. Moreover, handwriting is always used in formal situations to show off the respect toward the receiver as it is carefully composed.
To conclude, although there are fewer times that we need to write by hands than in the past, handwriting, on many occasion, is the most appropriate means of communication.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 242, Rule ID: SEND_AN_EMAIL[1]
Message: Consider using 'email'.
Suggestion: email
... letter. For example, the employees can send an email attachment to their customers to discus...
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Line 5, column 110, Rule ID: MANY_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun occasion seems to be countable; consider using: 'many occasions'.
Suggestion: many occasions
...hands than in the past, handwriting, on many occasion, is the most appropriate means of commu...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, however, if, may, moreover, so, therefore, for example, in addition, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 13.1623246493 144% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 10.4138276553 38% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 24.0651302605 112% => OK
Preposition: 56.0 41.998997996 133% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1755.0 1615.20841683 109% => OK
No of words: 348.0 315.596192385 110% => OK
Chars per words: 5.04310344828 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.31911543099 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.93165843032 2.80592935109 104% => OK
Unique words: 211.0 176.041082164 120% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.60632183908 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 546.3 506.74238477 108% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 9.0 4.76152304609 189% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 46.6997567868 49.4020404114 95% => OK
Chars per sentence: 97.5 106.682146367 91% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.3333333333 20.7667163134 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.77777777778 7.06120827912 96% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.209269462941 0.244688304435 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.057474409283 0.084324248473 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0564258893983 0.0667982634062 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.102544339515 0.151304729494 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0511749684297 0.056905535591 90% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.0 13.0946893788 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 50.2224549098 104% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.95 12.4159519038 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.98 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 97.0 78.4519038076 124% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.78957915832 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.