Nowadays, various trends induce pepole in abundant ways. And one from all is motive high school graduate to take one year break for travel or work before entering to becholor graduation. which is rewarding to students in maltipurpouse . Instance, seek a experience, assist to select a suitable strem. And gain crusial values of living. Although, Carrier delayed as well as, study link distubance are elementry drawbacks of this eminent trend.
undeniably, exprience is one of the major benifit of this thought.what is community? how to behave at several spots. this kind of questions resolve through this gap. From traveling or working leads to meet new pepole, could aid into learning of adjustment with diffrerent individuls or places, which is so usefull them not only in college but in onwards life also. In addition, students have been aware about thire particular intrest, which play significant role for choosing a responsible streem. To examplify, travell to historic places might be provoke intrest in taking archaeology education. moreover,knowledge about valuse of money, need, nature, life , indipendace, survival would understood by them.
However, there are numbure of demarits too. such as, people might believe that , due to travel or work chance of decline of concentration towards study could be aggravate, and may have to face drastic consequnces in future. To illustrate, as per surve many adultescent have dificulty in focus at beginning of college after break. Furthermore, delayed carrier can be consider as key defect of this belive., if you would not achinve degree in time, it lead delayed in job and produce shortege of oppurtunity for future, therefor people think that it is a west of time in this cpmpititive era.
to conclude, as coin, this view has pros as well as cons. although it totally depend upon individuls perception that they want to consider disadvantage or rewards.
- Some people agrue that it is best to accept a bad situation such as an unsatisfactory job or shortage of money Others belive that it is better to try and improve such situation Discuss both views and give your own opinion 11
- The diagram illustrate the procces that is used to nanufacture brickes for the building industry Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comperision where relevent 11
- In some countries young people are encouraged to work or travel for a year between finishing high school and starting university studies Discuss the advantages and disadvantages for young people who decide to do this 84
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, however, if, may, moreover, so, well, in addition, kind of, such as, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 51.0 41.998997996 121% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1608.0 1615.20841683 100% => OK
No of words: 305.0 315.596192385 97% => OK
Chars per words: 5.27213114754 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.17902490978 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.91496247669 2.80592935109 104% => OK
Unique words: 210.0 176.041082164 119% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.688524590164 0.561755894193 123% => OK
syllable_count: 507.6 506.74238477 100% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 16.0721442886 118% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 59.208210481 49.4020404114 120% => OK
Chars per sentence: 84.6315789474 106.682146367 79% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.0526315789 20.7667163134 77% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.42105263158 7.06120827912 77% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 25.0 5.01903807615 498% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 9.0 3.4128256513 264% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.171055768097 0.244688304435 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0365069010293 0.084324248473 43% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0441618301554 0.0667982634062 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0913981498086 0.151304729494 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.033080191634 0.056905535591 58% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.4 13.0946893788 87% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 46.78 50.2224549098 93% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.99 12.4159519038 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.66 8.58950901804 112% => OK
difficult_words: 101.0 78.4519038076 129% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 5.0 9.78957915832 51% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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