Life is all about ups and downs, Meanwhile, Compromise is part and parced for this fluctuating life, Therefor, a group of people think that, acceptance of poor condition is best option for survival, at otherside, an encoureged individuals presume that one should try to get rid of certain situation for having a great dewelling. Moreover, I have also similer feeling for this concept that adjustment is not a proper tool to deal with any worse state.
However, no one wants unhealthy plight in life though due to several cause, survivor has to admit bad situation. reasons like, person stick togather with disappointing work as it provide fruitful rewards in term of excellent payment. another cause could be derad. beacuse of fear of losing everything, person never disatteched his self from his comfort zone, no matter how hard the conditions. Lastly, they haven't amply faith in themself, so, eventually they give up and commit settelment with dreadful status. for Instance, one of my colleague have low confidence issue, therefor, she get adjustment with the situation, inspite of all troubles, which she have to faced regularly.
on the flipside, the courageous community have exect opposite perception, they feel that ,compromise with terrible condition is not best solution. furthermore, Individul have to motive hisself to get out of that state, which is not only good for self-setisfaction but also for great abording.and ultimately, it lead towards less trouble life and estsblish more positivity as well as gratification. In addition subject could set exemplar for fourthcoming generation. for illustration, famous bussinessmen Dhirubhai Ambani as, we know the stuggle of him to get success, if he wasn't try to exit his trouble then he never get his idial life. Finally, to overcome own apprehension, one should have to fight with bad situation.
As conclusion, as we take a more risk, we get more closer to our dream life, so, I opine that fighting with worst state is worthy for healthy and happy life.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
Life is all about ups and downs, Meanwhi...
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Line 1, column 205, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[4]
Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'is the best'.
Suggestion: is the best
...hink that, acceptance of poor condition is best option for survival, at otherside, an e...
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Line 3, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
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Suggestion:
... tool to deal with any worse state. However, no one wants unhealthy plight i...
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Line 3, column 95, Rule ID: MANY_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun cause seems to be countable; consider using: 'several causes'.
Suggestion: several causes
... unhealthy plight in life though due to several cause, survivor has to admit bad situation. r...
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Suggestion: Reasons
...e, survivor has to admit bad situation. reasons like, person stick togather with disapp...
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Suggestion: Another
...l rewards in term of excellent payment. another cause could be derad. beacuse of fear o...
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Suggestion: Beacuse
... payment. another cause could be derad. beacuse of fear of losing everything, person ne...
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Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: haven't
...r how hard the conditions. Lastly, they havent amply faith in themself, so, eventually...
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Suggestion: For
...commit settelment with dreadful status. for Instance, one of my colleague have low ...
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Line 3, column 620, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR[1]
Message: The pronoun 'she' must be used with a third-person verb: 'gets'.
Suggestion: gets
...ave low confidence issue, therefor, she get adjustment with the situation, inspite ...
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Line 3, column 690, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR[1]
Message: The pronoun 'she' must be used with a third-person verb: 'has'.
Suggestion: has
...ion, inspite of all troubles, which she have to faced regularly. ...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...es, which she have to faced regularly. on the f...
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Suggestion: On
... on the flipside, the courageous community ...
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Line 5, column 121, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...xect opposite perception, they feel that ,compromise with terrible condition is no...
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Line 5, column 161, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[4]
Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'not the best'.
Suggestion: not the best
... ,compromise with terrible condition is not best solution. furthermore, Individul have t...
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Suggestion: Furthermore
...errible condition is not best solution. furthermore, Individul have to motive hisself to ge...
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Line 5, column 344, Rule ID: IT_VBZ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'leads'?
Suggestion: leads
...o for great abording.and ultimately, it lead towards less trouble life and estsblish...
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Line 5, column 434, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[2]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: addition,
...positivity as well as gratification. In addition subject could set exemplar for fourthco...
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Suggestion: For
...t exemplar for fourthcoming generation. for illustration, famous bussinessmen Dhiru...
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Line 5, column 607, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: wasn't
...he stuggle of him to get success, if he wasnt try to exit his trouble then he never g...
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Line 5, column 651, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR[3]
Message: The pronoun 'he' must be used with a third-person verb: 'gets'.
Suggestion: gets
...t try to exit his trouble then he never get his idial life. Finally, to overcome ow...
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Line 7, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ld have to fight with bad situation. As conclusion, as we take a more risk, w...
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Line 7, column 80, Rule ID: MOST_COMPARATIVE[2]
Message: Use only 'closer' (without 'more') when you use the comparative.
Suggestion: closer
...clusion, as we take a more risk, we get more closer to our dream life, so, I opine that fig...
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Line 7, column 137, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[2]
Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'with the worst'.
Suggestion: with the worst
...r dream life, so, I opine that fighting with worst state is worthy for healthy and happy l...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, furthermore, however, if, lastly, moreover, so, then, well, while, as to, for instance, in addition, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 24.0651302605 121% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 20.0 8.3376753507 240% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1698.0 1615.20841683 105% => OK
No of words: 328.0 315.596192385 104% => OK
Chars per words: 5.17682926829 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.25567506705 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.93013025234 2.80592935109 104% => OK
Unique words: 214.0 176.041082164 122% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.65243902439 0.561755894193 116% => OK
syllable_count: 524.7 506.74238477 104% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 72.0162963417 49.4020404114 146% => OK
Chars per sentence: 121.285714286 106.682146367 114% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.4285714286 20.7667163134 113% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.35714285714 7.06120827912 133% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 24.0 5.01903807615 478% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.053516074007 0.244688304435 22% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0175027903689 0.084324248473 21% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0281330867822 0.0667982634062 42% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0329881145997 0.151304729494 22% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0299345414503 0.056905535591 53% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.7 13.0946893788 112% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 50.2224549098 96% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.06 12.4159519038 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.35 8.58950901804 109% => OK
difficult_words: 95.0 78.4519038076 121% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 9.78957915832 138% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.2359550562 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 9
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