The diagram illustrate the procces that is used to nanufacture brickes for the building industry.
Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comperision where relevent.
The configuration depicted the procedure of brikes production especially for builing industry.
Overall, the diagram illustrate the seven different stages of brikes manufacturing, from exvacation of clay to delivery of final product as brikes
In detaild, from the seven stages first one is digging up of soil through larde digger. After that in second phace excavated clay is poved on metal grid, which breakes soil into small pieces with aid of roller. Then sand and water are add into breaked clay and this mixure turn into brikes by two method, ethier utilization of wire cutter or placed in mould, in following stage.
For next step, created brikes are now put in dry-oven for drying, about 24-48 hours. In subsequent phase, brikes have been heated under modrate level (200c to 980c) following by high tempreture of 870c to 1300c, heating proccess is occure in kiln for both tempreture. And this stage completed with 2-3days of cooling of product in cooling chamber. after getting cool, brikes are ready to packaging. Finally, this procedure finished with delivering of output at respected place.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
finally, first, if, second, so, then
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.0 100% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 6.8 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.15609756098 63% => OK
Pronoun: 4.0 5.60731707317 71% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 33.7804878049 107% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.97073170732 76% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 902.0 965.302439024 93% => OK
No of words: 173.0 196.424390244 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.21387283237 4.92477711251 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.62669911048 3.73543355544 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.48392203767 2.65546596893 94% => OK
Unique words: 121.0 106.607317073 114% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.699421965318 0.547539520022 128% => OK
syllable_count: 267.3 283.868780488 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.33902439024 46% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 7.0 3.36585365854 208% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 8.94146341463 101% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 22.4926829268 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 68.2030374763 43.030603864 158% => OK
Chars per sentence: 100.222222222 112.824112599 89% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.2222222222 22.9334400587 84% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.0 5.23603664747 76% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 1.69756097561 295% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.09268292683 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0550249171788 0.215688989381 26% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0217366567741 0.103423049105 21% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0215868849915 0.0843802449381 26% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0382295417223 0.15604864568 24% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0158223474438 0.0819641961636 19% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.7 13.2329268293 96% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 61.2550243902 99% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 10.3012195122 92% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.94 11.4140731707 113% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.05 8.06136585366 112% => OK
difficult_words: 49.0 40.7170731707 120% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.4329268293 96% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.9970731707 87% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 11.0658536585 90% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.2359550562 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 9
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