Despite huge improvements in healthcare, the overall standard of physical health in many developed countries is now falling. What could bethe reason for this trend, and what can be done to reverse it.
There is no denying that individuals living in numerous thriving nations can see themselves having access to the growth and expansion of healthcare in present-day society. Nevertheless, the physical standard health amount is being subsided here. In this essay, I will point out two main factors contributes to this trend and put forward some feasible solutions helping people deal with it.
The most striking reason of poor health problem in developed countries is sedentary lifestyle. After a day of hard working, most adults regularly tend to unwind by lieing down, catching a movie or playing games console rather than doing outdoor sports, to say nothing of their office job which requires little physical activity. Additionally, nowadays people usually travel by car instead of walking or cycling regardless of whether workplace is far from their homes or not. Then came physical problems including impairing their bodily functions and agility, as this state has occurred constantly for a long time. Another cause that gives rise to serious repercussions for physical health is eating habit. The majority of people have comparatively lesstime to enjoy eating preparing home-made food because of being on go. Hence, they would rather eat fast foods much more than healthy foods by virtue of its convenience and addictive taste. As a result, not only the consumption of too much junk food makes them at far greater risk of unintentionally overweight and obesity but also increasing significantly their daily intake of dentrimental substances.
In order to deal with this problem, it is essential to get involvements in both individuals and governments. On the one hand, government should harness open spaces to construct pedestrianized streets, outdoor multi-sport courts and gyms for those who aim at achieving long-term weight loss or boosting their physical wellbeing. Therefore, people can be aroused to take regular exercise by having good enough facilities. Futhermore, a health channel, television show or a website also should be established to deliver straightforward lessons and news coverage about cools tip and knowledge to stay healthy in order to help people avoid being become prone to obesity or other illnesses. On the other hand, apart from the government's efforts, citizens should also try their utmost to break unhealthy habits and have leisure pursuits doing wonders for their physical bodies such as taking up sport. In particular, when they are active outdoors, the sunshine and fresh air help to build up their immune systems. This is even better than being indoors, working out at the gym to keep fit.
To draw the conclusion, one can say that in spite of improving efficiency in healthcare in the most flourishing countries, meanwhile, the general standard of physical health is decreased these days. However, I strongly believe that more physical exercises and fresher meals are able to mitigate the problem.
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- Despite huge improvements in healthcare the overall standard of physical health in many developed countries is now falling What could bethe reason for this trend and what can be done to reverse it 56
- Despite huge improvements in healthcare the overall standard of physical health in many developed countries is now falling What could bethe reason for this trend and what can be done to reverse it 89
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, hence, however, if, nevertheless, so, then, therefore, well, while, apart from, in fact, in particular, such as, as a result, in spite of, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 19.0 10.4138276553 182% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 24.0651302605 116% => OK
Preposition: 64.0 41.998997996 152% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2481.0 1615.20841683 154% => OK
No of words: 465.0 315.596192385 147% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.33548387097 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.64369019777 4.20363070211 110% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.83683874481 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 298.0 176.041082164 169% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.640860215054 0.561755894193 114% => OK
syllable_count: 747.9 506.74238477 148% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 6.0 2.52805611222 237% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 9.0 4.76152304609 189% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 16.0721442886 124% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 56.4608492674 49.4020404114 114% => OK
Chars per sentence: 124.05 106.682146367 116% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.25 20.7667163134 112% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.35 7.06120827912 118% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.9879759519 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.178234113729 0.244688304435 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.05493200852 0.084324248473 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0487072489796 0.0667982634062 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.115769000997 0.151304729494 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.023942590133 0.056905535591 42% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.3 13.0946893788 117% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 50.2224549098 96% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.99 12.4159519038 113% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.5 8.58950901804 111% => OK
difficult_words: 139.0 78.4519038076 177% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.