Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
It is better for people to choose jobs that come with high salaries even though they do not enjoy doing it than to choose jobs that they enjoy but come with low salaries.
Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
Some people state that it is primal to choose a career that they enjoy setting aside the salary because this way they will be happy in doing the job and the money comes accordingly. However, others think otherwise. The later believes that it is more important the salary than the work they are on. In my opinion, it is better to work in a job which we like than being compelled to do what we do not enjoy. I feel this way as I will talk over in this article.
First of all, when we are forced to do something that we do not like merely because of the huge amount of money we will receive, we may end up in depression. For example, one of my friends broke out one job in which the payment was extremely good but as months followed he started feeling sad and at the end of two years he had to be assisted by a psicology, where by the end of one year he got over the feelings having to spend almost the entirely salary received. Therefore, this example elucidates the desideratum of choosing the preferred work.
Moreover, breaking out our enjoyable job brightens up our life because there is nothing better than choosing the best career and feeling satisfied with it. For instance, a few years ago I was working as a mechanical engineer however, I was not feeling good with that position then I decided to choose a different path and started working as an aerospace engineer. It did not take so long to observe my merriment with that job even though the salary was not in great amounts, at least I was working with something which brought me happiness. Thus, this another instance clarifies the necessity of taking the poised path to keep on the life.
Finally, I strongly believe that doing the job we like the most brings us happiness and ditches any sort of maladies.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 359, Rule ID: WHERE_AS[1]
Message: Did you mean 'whereby'?
Suggestion: whereby
...s he had to be assisted by a psicology, where by the end of one year he got over the fee...
^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
accordingly, but, finally, first, however, if, may, moreover, so, then, therefore, thus, at least, for example, for instance, i feel, sort of, first of all, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 15.1003584229 93% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 9.8082437276 41% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 13.8261648746 43% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 12.0 11.0286738351 109% => OK
Pronoun: 44.0 43.0788530466 102% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 52.1666666667 84% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.0752688172 62% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1446.0 1977.66487455 73% => OK
No of words: 326.0 407.700716846 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.43558282209 4.8611393121 91% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.24917287072 4.48103885553 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.42511387607 2.67179642975 91% => OK
Unique words: 175.0 212.727598566 82% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.536809815951 0.524837075471 102% => OK
syllable_count: 463.5 618.680645161 75% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.59856630824 83% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.51792114695 28% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.94265232975 40% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 20.6003584229 63% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.1344086022 124% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 70.7333521091 48.9658058833 144% => OK
Chars per sentence: 111.230769231 100.406767564 111% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.0769230769 20.6045352989 122% => OK
Discourse Markers: 13.0769230769 5.45110844103 240% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.5376344086 18% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 11.8709677419 59% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.85842293907 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.88709677419 61% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.326129987323 0.236089414692 138% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.106373808995 0.076458572812 139% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0903958035407 0.0737576698707 123% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.181266110283 0.150856017488 120% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0888405878261 0.0645574589148 138% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.0 11.7677419355 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 63.02 58.1214874552 108% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 10.1575268817 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.77 10.9000537634 80% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.73 8.01818996416 96% => OK
difficult_words: 59.0 86.8835125448 68% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 10.002688172 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.0537634409 119% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.247311828 78% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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