Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
In twenty years there will be fewer cars in use than there are today.
Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
Car is considered to be one of a great invent that reduce the distance from person to person, which also accelerates the speed of life and work for urban people. In this way, car is gradually become a vital and indispensable product for citizens, and the number of car owners is still growing in the past few years. Some people might hold the view that there will be fewer cars in use than there are today in twenty years. As far as I am concerned, it might be possible that the number of cars is constantly growing in twenty years.
It is undeniable that car bring much environmental pollution in recent years, and also cause traffic problems in many big cities all around the world. Some environmentalists call on that people should take more public transport means, so they can use less cars, which could be benefit to release the traffic jam and also contribute to the air protection. Beside, governments increase the tax of car purchasing to reduce the number of cars in the road.
However, different kind of strategies mentioned above is ineffective to ease the growth of cars, the number of cars is still growing each year, and it might last much longer. As a matter of fact, after realizing the pollution from gas cars, some scientists and companies were starting the plan to create electric cars. Tesla is one of a leading company in this field, and there are many different types of electric cars are sold in the market. Electric cars can both solve the pollution problem and bring people convenient life, which might become popular for a long time in the future.
Beside, car is now still difficult to be replaced by other vehicles, for it\'s quite easy to control for most people. Also, when we want to travel to somewhere nearby with our family members or friends, driving a car is always the best choice. It can provide people a relatively personal space and also bring us more flexible and free choices about the time, comparing to train and airplane.
To sum up, I disagree that the number of cars will be fewer in twenty years than today. Although they might do some harm to our environment and bring traffic problems, there are alternative electric car, and some crucial requirements provided by car is hard to be replaced by any other vehicles at present.
| Post date | Users | Rates | Link to Content |
|---|---|---|---|
| 2023-06-23 | YasamanEsml | 76 | view |
| 2023-04-13 | sonyeoso | 76 | view |
| 2023-01-11 | theprasad | 73 | view |
| 2023-01-04 | Mangiring Pandapotan | 83 | view |
| 2022-11-05 | daddy | 70 | view |
- Do you agree or disagree with the following statement In the past it was easier to identify what type of career or job would lead to a secure successful future Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer 76
- Do you agree or disagree with the following statement Most advertisements make products seem much better than they really are Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer 73
- In 1938 an archaeologist in Iraq acquired a set of clay jars that had been excavated two years earlier by villagers constructing a railroad line The vessels were about 2 200 years old Each clay jar contained a copper cylinder surrounding an iron rod The a 78
- Agnostids were a group of marine animals that became extinct about 450 million years ago Agnostid fossils can be found in rocks in many areas around the world From the fossil remains we know that agnostids were primitive arthropods relatives of modern day 80
- A recently issued twenty year study on headaches suffered by the residents of Mentia investigated the possible therapeutic effect of consuming salicylates Salicylates are members of the same chemical family as aspirin a medicine used to treat headaches Al 60
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 252, Rule ID: FEWER_LESS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'fewer'? The noun cars is countable.
Suggestion: fewer
...public transport means, so they can use less cars, which could be benefit to release...
^^^^
Line 5, column 383, Rule ID: NUMEROUS_DIFFERENT[1]
Message: Use simply 'many'.
Suggestion: many
...ng company in this field, and there are many different types of electric cars are sold in the ...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 7, column 392, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... time, comparing to train and airplane. To sum up, I disagree that the number of...
^^^^^
Line 9, column 200, Rule ID: THERE_RE_MANY[3]
Message: Possible agreement error. Did you mean 'cars'?
Suggestion: cars
...roblems, there are alternative electric car, and some crucial requirements provided...
^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, so, still, kind of, as a matter of fact, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 23.0 15.1003584229 152% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 9.8082437276 122% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 13.8261648746 108% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 11.0286738351 91% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 43.0788530466 49% => OK
Preposition: 54.0 52.1666666667 104% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.0752688172 74% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1885.0 1977.66487455 95% => OK
No of words: 401.0 407.700716846 98% => OK
Chars per words: 4.70074812968 4.8611393121 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.47492842339 4.48103885553 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.51473230839 2.67179642975 94% => OK
Unique words: 211.0 212.727598566 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.526184538653 0.524837075471 100% => OK
syllable_count: 585.0 618.680645161 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 9.59856630824 42% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 3.51792114695 142% => OK
Conjunction: 5.0 1.86738351254 268% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.94265232975 61% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 20.6003584229 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.1344086022 124% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 35.2559835347 48.9658058833 72% => OK
Chars per sentence: 117.8125 100.406767564 117% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.0625 20.6045352989 122% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.625 5.45110844103 85% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.5376344086 72% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 11.8709677419 93% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.85842293907 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.88709677419 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.203305889843 0.236089414692 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.082044418155 0.076458572812 107% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.102750880445 0.0737576698707 139% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.123429660569 0.150856017488 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0781024746235 0.0645574589148 121% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.2 11.7677419355 112% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 54.56 58.1214874552 94% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 10.1575268817 117% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.28 10.9000537634 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.99 8.01818996416 100% => OK
difficult_words: 79.0 86.8835125448 91% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 10.002688172 135% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.0537634409 119% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.247311828 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
---------------------
Rates: 80 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 24 Out of 30
---------------------
Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.