The line graph below shows the average daily maximum temperatures for Auckland and Christchurch, two cities in New Zealand, and London and Edinburgh, two cities in the United Kingdom.
The graph shows information about average maximum temperature of the four cities is Auckland, Christchurch, London and Edinburgh.
Overall, the average temperature of the two cities in New Zealand is in contrast to the two cities of the United Kingdom. Although the temperature of United Kingdom is lower than New Zealand.
Looking at the details, both countries of New Zealand have warm temperatures in January and February. The temperature of these two months ranges from 23 degrees Celsius to 24 degrees Celsius. However, both countries experienced a drop in temperature in June and July. In Auckland the lowest temperature was 15 degrees Celsius while in Edinburgh the number decreased slightly to 11 degrees Celsius.
By contrast, the temperature of the two countries in the United Kingdom went in the opposite direction. During January and February in these two countries, the temperature drops to 5 degrees Celsius. However, by July-August, this number is surprisingly high with the temperature from 17 degrees Celsius to 21 degrees Celsius and it returns to the original temperature in the last months of the year.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, look, while, in contrast, in contrast to
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.0 71% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 6.8 74% => OK
Relative clauses : 0.0 3.15609756098 0% => OK
Pronoun: 4.0 5.60731707317 71% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 33.7804878049 101% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.97073170732 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 949.0 965.302439024 98% => OK
No of words: 179.0 196.424390244 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.30167597765 4.92477711251 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.65774358864 3.73543355544 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.00295829091 2.65546596893 113% => OK
Unique words: 88.0 106.607317073 83% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.491620111732 0.547539520022 90% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 288.0 283.868780488 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.45097560976 110% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 5.0 4.33902439024 115% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 3.36585365854 119% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 8.94146341463 112% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 22.4926829268 76% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 35.3781005708 43.030603864 82% => OK
Chars per sentence: 94.9 112.824112599 84% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.9 22.9334400587 78% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.9 5.23603664747 94% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 1.69756097561 236% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 3.70975609756 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.13902439024 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.09268292683 73% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.387059343408 0.215688989381 179% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.187823038394 0.103423049105 182% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.170197586066 0.0843802449381 202% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.309473327614 0.15604864568 198% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.174112132051 0.0819641961636 212% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.5 13.2329268293 94% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 61.2550243902 89% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 10.3012195122 96% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.16 11.4140731707 115% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.27 8.06136585366 103% => OK
difficult_words: 43.0 40.7170731707 106% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 11.4329268293 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.9970731707 80% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.