in many countries more and more young people are leaving school but unable to find jobs. What problem do you think youth unemployed causes for individual and society? What may the store be taken to reduce the level of unemployment among youngsters?
In this contemporary era, pupils feel bored when they are doing a study, therefore many students quit school in many nations. That creates an impact on unemployment. This essay will explain the side effects of unemployment in the young generation, and also give some possible solutions for reducing the level of unemployment, which described in the subsequent paragraphs.
To embarks with, there are plenty of situations that happened due to the no-jobs. First and foremost, without having a job, citizens cannot fulfil their basic necessities. That leads them to do unsocial works, which harms society. In addition, the cases of suicide are increased because of not enough money for living. Also, if people do not have jobs, then they think a lot about their future, which generates problems in their brain in the form of mental diseases. For example, 45% of mental diseases happened, because of not having work, which written in a survey of the University of India.
On the other hand, there are various ways, which will provide jobs and works to the young generation. Firstly, the government should more focus on industrialization instead of farming, and constructs numbers of factories, which give a chance to the fresher for doing work. Secondly, if the authorities reduce working hours, then they required more employees, which indirectly solve the issue of unemployment. For instance, the U.S have fewer unemployed people because they have only 40 hours of working in a week.
To conclude, Youth unemployment is a serious issue, which increases the crime level and the cases of mental disorder. The government provides jobs to the young generation by building industries and reducing working hours.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 154, Rule ID: BASIC_FUNDAMENTALS[1]
Message: Use simply 'necessities'.
Suggestion: necessities
...ing a job, citizens cannot fulfil their basic necessities. That leads them to do unsocial works, ...
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Line 5, column 430, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: S
...ue of unemployment. For instance, the U.S have fewer unemployed people because th...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, if, second, secondly, so, then, therefore, for example, for instance, in addition, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 13.1623246493 38% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 12.0 7.30460921844 164% => OK
Pronoun: 13.0 24.0651302605 54% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.3376753507 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1440.0 1615.20841683 89% => OK
No of words: 275.0 315.596192385 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.23636363636 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.07223819929 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.79531130453 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 164.0 176.041082164 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.596363636364 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 431.1 506.74238477 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 40.6675409742 49.4020404114 82% => OK
Chars per sentence: 96.0 106.682146367 90% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.3333333333 20.7667163134 88% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.13333333333 7.06120827912 115% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 8.67935871743 23% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.9879759519 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.186302202123 0.244688304435 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0579707503804 0.084324248473 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.036610232498 0.0667982634062 55% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.120084697749 0.151304729494 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0282627333956 0.056905535591 50% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.4 13.0946893788 95% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 50.2224549098 106% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.11 12.4159519038 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.95 8.58950901804 104% => OK
difficult_words: 77.0 78.4519038076 98% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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