In few nations, Modernization led to parents planning children in the later stages of life. There are many positives with this decision at the same time there are also many issues associated with such decisions.
These days, Adults are getting married only after the education and after achieving the stage of independency so they are getting married late. Thinking in mind " How to take care of children?" Even after marriage they are not showing interests towards kids immediately, they are instead concentrating on the financial stability. Once they achieved a state of settlement then they are giving birth to kids. This actually helps the children to enjoy a good way of life as their parents can supply them with all their wishes.However, if the parents give birth to children at very young age they may not be able to provide all requests of their children.
On the other hand, If children are born late to the parents there are considerable amount of problems associated with it . Ideas between the children and parents may vary as their is large age gap. Here, kid lives in an imaginary world while parents will be in down to earth mode. For example: Children always think of games and enjoyment while parents think of financial stability and studies.
Along with this, If baby's are born after 35 years of age of parents then they are more prone to health issues at the teen stages of children's life. It is also observed that the parents may look older when compared to the babies age .In addition to this, Such parents are less likely to enjoy their with grand children as the average life span of a person in the present generation is 65.
To summarize, Though there are advantages with having children after good settlement of life .In my view, the disadvantages outweigh the positives associated with it as parents may suffer from diseases and difference in age between them lead to difference in ideas.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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...ncentrating on the financial stability. Once they achieved a state of settlement the...
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...e to the parents there are considerable amount of problems associated with it . Ideas ...
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...k older when compared to the babies age .In addition to this, Such parents are le...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, however, if, look, may, so, then, while, for example, in addition, in my view, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 13.1623246493 137% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 59.0 41.998997996 140% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1622.0 1615.20841683 100% => OK
No of words: 330.0 315.596192385 105% => OK
Chars per words: 4.91515151515 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.26214759535 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.60200309978 2.80592935109 93% => OK
Unique words: 173.0 176.041082164 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.524242424242 0.561755894193 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 507.6 506.74238477 100% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 64.7710578949 49.4020404114 131% => OK
Chars per sentence: 124.769230769 106.682146367 117% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.3846153846 20.7667163134 122% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.61538461538 7.06120827912 122% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 16.0 5.01903807615 319% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.207986940796 0.244688304435 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0833427316919 0.084324248473 99% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0673038004313 0.0667982634062 101% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.132825451907 0.151304729494 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.067448390571 0.056905535591 119% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.4 13.0946893788 110% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 54.56 50.2224549098 109% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.55 12.4159519038 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.65 8.58950901804 89% => OK
difficult_words: 58.0 78.4519038076 74% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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