Medical care is an essential aspect in all nations of the world. As a result of development in medical facilities, Greater number of individuals are surviving for a longer period of life. Accordingly, Average number of living years are increasing day-to-day. Though there are positives associated with this; At the same time, There are many problems faced because of this situation.
In a Population consisting of more number of elder people, Large amount of economy should be generated towards medical facilities as they are more prone to health issues. It is necessary for the government to construct higher number of nursing home's with all the amenities . Along with this, Various new technologies are introduced which are costly and in turn helps in raising the life expectancy of the people
Moreover, Whole world is suffering from severe food crisis due to poor and less efficient farming techniques.
As a result, Food is becoming expensive. Hence, Many poor people are striving for food and dying of hunger. So, exceeding the life expectancy of some people is leading to the death of many youngsters,children and adults due to lack of sufficient food.
On the other hand, There are also positives that arise because of raised number of surviving years. Parents can spend more count of years with children and thus can train their children in a much better way. It is also believed that parents can induce positive ideas in their children during odd situations.
To recapitulate, Raising amount of older people is leading the society into financial crisis and food insufficiency .Hence, In my opinion, There are many negatives associated with it.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
accordingly, also, hence, if, moreover, so, thus, as a result, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 13.1623246493 137% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 12.0 24.0651302605 50% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 41.998997996 105% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1406.0 1615.20841683 87% => OK
No of words: 270.0 315.596192385 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.20740740741 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.05360046442 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.82127393334 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 157.0 176.041082164 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.581481481481 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 443.7 506.74238477 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 56.0659232966 49.4020404114 113% => OK
Chars per sentence: 100.428571429 106.682146367 94% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.2857142857 20.7667163134 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.78571428571 7.06120827912 96% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.38176352705 137% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 13.0 5.01903807615 259% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.140889933648 0.244688304435 58% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0460459205336 0.084324248473 55% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0424967780956 0.0667982634062 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.063770991292 0.151304729494 42% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0636637514448 0.056905535591 112% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.8 13.0946893788 98% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 50.2224549098 104% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.94 12.4159519038 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.97 8.58950901804 104% => OK
difficult_words: 75.0 78.4519038076 96% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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