MANY UNIVERSITY STUDENTS LIVE WITH THEIR FAMILIES WHILE OTHERS LIVE AWAY FROM HOME BECAUSE THEIR UNIVERSITIES ARE IN DIFFERENT PLACES. WHAT ARE THE ADVANTAGES AND THE DISADVANTAGES?
In contemporary era , owing to their studies some students have to stay in the hostel while other stay in their house . Those students who live far away from their family faces plenty problems however who live with their families they don't experience life in new way . This essay would shed light on the advantages ad disadvantages.
The greatest benefit of the students who live far away from their home that they experience new things in their life . In the beginning they face trouble , but after that they knew how to handle the problems or any other situation. The reason is that now they don't have to depend on others. For eg : When i got admission in university in my first year , i faced some problems but they taught me new things . I experienced many new things in my life which helped me in my career later. In hostel you met new faces who are not in your batch or course . And u learned how to adjust with someone . Moreover you also realised the value of your family. In my opinion , students have many benefits if they studied far away from house.
The main advantage of living with family for college students is that they are financially secure.This is because they do not have to pay rent of hostel and other expenses . This helps them to focus on their studies.The major downside of staying with parents is an extra pressure of family members to perform in their exams . Sometimes which led them to in the depression .
In the conclusion , living without their parents students experience how to manage ourself and also learn the value of their family. Moreover the value of food prepared by mom's hand.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, however, if, moreover, so, while, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 13.1623246493 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 7.85571142285 13% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 42.0 24.0651302605 175% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 47.0 41.998997996 112% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1328.0 1615.20841683 82% => OK
No of words: 285.0 315.596192385 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.65964912281 5.12529762239 91% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.10876417139 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.41908155207 2.80592935109 86% => OK
Unique words: 148.0 176.041082164 84% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.519298245614 0.561755894193 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 412.2 506.74238477 81% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 41.074158606 49.4020404114 83% => OK
Chars per sentence: 78.1176470588 106.682146367 73% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.7647058824 20.7667163134 81% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.82352941176 7.06120827912 54% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 35.0 5.01903807615 697% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.350898932436 0.244688304435 143% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0971536764712 0.084324248473 115% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.104694813644 0.0667982634062 157% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.22770850274 0.151304729494 150% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0769357319667 0.056905535591 135% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.9 13.0946893788 68% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 72.16 50.2224549098 144% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 11.3001002004 64% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.45 12.4159519038 76% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.09 8.58950901804 83% => OK
difficult_words: 48.0 78.4519038076 61% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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