Some people say History is one of the most important school subjects. Other people think that, in today’s world, subjects like Science and Technology are more important than History.
Nowadays some people believe that history play a vital role in curriculum while others argue that science and technology are more significant . history tells about our ancients people howsoever science enhance our knowledge . In my opinion, it is important to learn both subjects . The main purpose of this essay is to discuss the both sides views.
Firstly, history is the subject who keep us connected with cultures . In addition, it allow us to understand our past and extend the cultural awareness or moral comprehension of the world . For example, Vietnamese students are taught about the historical highlights in Vietnam like war and many ancient people who sacrificed their life because of peace and independence of their country .Moreover, awareness will spread in the humans with the help of this subject .
Secondly,according to few civilians; science and technology have indispensible part in scholar life. it assist in career later, so it is important to teach this matter in schools. In contemporary era, the technology gives the young generation many opportunities to get a job with high income .For instance , data analyst is the high paid careers and recruited by multiple companies.
In conclusion both history and science subjects have their own importance in schools. while history helps in increase the understanding about the ups and downs of their country, science subject give them carrer chances. Hence , people need to balance between them rather than concentrating on merely one subject.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, hence, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, while, for example, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1271.0 1615.20841683 79% => OK
No of words: 238.0 315.596192385 75% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.34033613445 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.92775363542 4.20363070211 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.94393432152 2.80592935109 105% => OK
Unique words: 150.0 176.041082164 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.63025210084 0.561755894193 112% => OK
syllable_count: 392.4 506.74238477 77% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 60.6231935618 49.4020404114 123% => OK
Chars per sentence: 97.7692307692 106.682146367 92% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.3076923077 20.7667163134 88% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.3076923077 7.06120827912 146% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 37.0 5.01903807615 737% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.365706446776 0.244688304435 149% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.120734158311 0.084324248473 143% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0834329066509 0.0667982634062 125% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.208094939619 0.151304729494 138% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.10806901059 0.056905535591 190% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.9 13.0946893788 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 50.2224549098 106% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.69 12.4159519038 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.97 8.58950901804 104% => OK
difficult_words: 67.0 78.4519038076 85% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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