Summerized the points made in lecture
The article and lecture both deal with the altruism behavior in which animals sacrifices their own interest for others. Whilst the author of the article thinks that altruism is selfishness behaviour for some reasons, the lecturer oppose the authors claims.
In his opinion, every animal gains some kind of appreciation for their selfless act.
First writer claims that, both humans and mammals is a example of altuism. Futhurmore it stated in the article that humans act of unselfishness range from the sharing of food with stangers to donation of body organs to family members and even strangers.
In contrast the lecturer argue that, humnans receive an appreciation from the society which consider valuable non -materal reward.
Second the author mention about the altruism in meerkats.Then goes on to explain that how the sentinel meerkat gaurd the group without eating and save them from prediators without caring about his own life. However, the lecturer refutesit and argu that sentiels meerkats eats before the others members of group and then stand near the burrows, make an alarm to aware them about preditors but while doing this, it became harmful to the other meerkat.
Finally, the writer assert that the altruism is selfless behavior. In addition, individuals performing altruistic acts gain nothing for themselves. As opposed to the autor, the lecturer holds that indivisuals gain appreciation and non material rewards from society.
In conclusion, although the reading and the lecture both discuss the altruism. The three main points made in reading are effectivley opposed by the lecturer
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, finally, first, however, if, second, so, then, while, in addition, in conclusion, in contrast, kind of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 10.4613686534 38% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 5.04856512141 0% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 7.30242825607 123% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 12.0772626932 83% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 22.412803532 80% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 30.3222958057 119% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 5.01324503311 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1358.0 1373.03311258 99% => OK
No of words: 254.0 270.72406181 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.34645669291 5.08290768461 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.99216450694 4.04702891845 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.56970527625 2.5805825403 100% => OK
Unique words: 153.0 145.348785872 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.602362204724 0.540411800872 111% => OK
syllable_count: 399.6 419.366225166 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.55342163355 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 3.25607064018 31% => OK
Article: 6.0 8.23620309051 73% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.25165562914 160% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.51434878587 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 2.5761589404 155% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 13.0662251656 99% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 21.2450331126 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 54.0820109216 49.2860985944 110% => OK
Chars per sentence: 104.461538462 110.228320801 95% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.5384615385 21.698381199 90% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.23076923077 7.06452816374 117% => OK
Paragraphs: 7.0 4.09492273731 171% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 8.0 4.19205298013 191% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 4.33554083885 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 4.45695364238 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.27373068433 94% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.154602373721 0.272083759551 57% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0627861608186 0.0996497079465 63% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0974818711857 0.0662205650399 147% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0796116593876 0.162205337803 49% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.10229690351 0.0443174109184 231% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.5 13.3589403974 101% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 53.8541721854 97% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 5.55761589404 56% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.0289183223 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.75 12.2367328918 112% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.24 8.42419426049 110% => OK
difficult_words: 75.0 63.6247240618 118% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 10.7273730684 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.498013245 91% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 11.2008830022 125% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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