Some people say that modern technology has made shopping today easier, while other disagree. Discuss both views and give your opinion
People have different views about whether Internet spreading offering a great sense of shopping or giving such obstacles. Although it can be argued that up-to-date technology gains benefits for shopping, I do believe that there is still advantages behind this issue.
On the one hand, it is claim that advanced technology made shopping uncomplicated for some reasons. Firstly, customrs can easily purchased without going to stores in person thanks to the advert of online websites. Therefore, they can buy things whenever they want, avoid time-consuming moving form home to the shop. In fact, the amount of online purchases significantly double the real-life one. Secondly, customers can pay the bill through credit card instead of cash payment for both offline and online shopping. Hence, people do not need to bring a lot of money along when buying offine, additionally, some online websites and apps offer a huge discount with preferential prices for customer purchasing by card. For example, Shopee always has more promotion and discount codes up to 1 million VND for card-used customers.
On the other hand, I would side with those who believe that technology development undergoing some drawbacks. First of all, online shopping restricts people to choose sizes fitly to their body shapes because of stimulated size charts. Hence, customers make wrong pick but cannot transfer the clothes back constantly due to complicated online returning goods strategy. Furthermore, online customers might encounter some risks. More precisely, many online websites with the policy about protecting user personal information is lenient and leaking customers’s phone numbers and addresses. As a result, many annoying and frauded call made to cheat on the customers for money and leads to online shopping unsafety.
In conclusion, while modern technology offers many pros for customers, I completely agree with those who believe that this trend prones to some potential cons. However, I think people will be highly awared about those demerits.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 130, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
Message: The verb 'can' requires the base form of the verb: 'purchase'
Suggestion: purchase
...e reasons. Firstly, customrs can easily purchased without going to stores in person thank...
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Line 3, column 786, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... more promotion and discount codes up to 1 million VND for card-used customers. ...
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Line 5, column 353, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[2]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'goods'' or 'good's'?
Suggestion: goods'; good's
...tly due to complicated online returning goods strategy. Furthermore, online customers...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, furthermore, hence, however, if, second, secondly, so, still, therefore, while, for example, i think, in conclusion, in fact, as a result, first of all, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 13.1623246493 38% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1730.0 1615.20841683 107% => OK
No of words: 316.0 315.596192385 100% => OK
Chars per words: 5.4746835443 5.12529762239 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.21620550194 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.73252118156 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 211.0 176.041082164 120% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.667721518987 0.561755894193 119% => OK
syllable_count: 528.3 506.74238477 104% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 34.0329577694 49.4020404114 69% => OK
Chars per sentence: 101.764705882 106.682146367 95% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.5882352941 20.7667163134 90% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.2352941176 7.06120827912 159% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.160727726826 0.244688304435 66% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0521982091077 0.084324248473 62% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0510423799572 0.0667982634062 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.102393334575 0.151304729494 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0146489890513 0.056905535591 26% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.6 13.0946893788 104% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.75 50.2224549098 89% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.45 12.4159519038 116% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.93 8.58950901804 104% => OK
difficult_words: 88.0 78.4519038076 112% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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