Migrating from one place to another place is quite crucial for a human being to get better amenities. In this contemporary era, people are moving towards the metropolitan for obtaining super medical care and marvelous education. This essay shall discuss the reasons behind this phenomenon.
To commence with, people in this advanced era prefer to live in well-developed cities such as Mumbai, Delhi, and Kolkata. Moreover, the public at megacities gets a good education and better health care facilities. They can get more opportunities in terms of jobs and feed their family members in a better manner. People who live in big cities get more options in terms of choice of selecting a course of education and acquire great jobs in any field.
Additionally, unfortunately in some countries such as India, people are not received better health care facilities and do not get a cure in the countryside due to lack of advanced machinery. Doctors and nurses get good remuneration in a big city so that they also prefer to do practice in metropolitan areas. However, luckily government has started decently medical treatment in remote areas and people are getting benefits from it. Furthermore, people who live in big cities can work in a multicultural company and make a good relationship with others. Chances of promotion in the job are also high in the metro as more and more people work in team.
To recapitulate, I reiterated to say that people get extraordinary amenities and great medical care at megacities. For this reason only, more and more people are migrating from remote areas to urban areas.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, furthermore, however, moreover, so, well, as to, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 12.0 24.0651302605 50% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1344.0 1615.20841683 83% => OK
No of words: 266.0 315.596192385 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.05263157895 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.03850299372 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.89541052604 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 142.0 176.041082164 81% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.533834586466 0.561755894193 95% => OK
syllable_count: 444.6 506.74238477 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 28.5153020145 49.4020404114 58% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 96.0 106.682146367 90% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.0 20.7667163134 91% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.42857142857 7.06120827912 63% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.170311018666 0.244688304435 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0625457318061 0.084324248473 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0647040662952 0.0667982634062 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0998918134006 0.151304729494 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0649058147956 0.056905535591 114% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.9 13.0946893788 91% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 43.73 50.2224549098 87% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.01 12.4159519038 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.85 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 72.0 78.4519038076 92% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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