Nowadays people are become couch potato because of sedentary life style. Masses are not spending their time by doing physical activities such as walking and exercise in spite of having myriads of health benefits. This essay will discuss the problems associated with this trend and suggest possible solutions in the subsequent paragraphs.
On the one hand, in this fast pace era, civilisation do not have time to go to gym or for walking as they are too much busy in thier work. People become workaholic due to monotonous working activities. Henceforth, they are not able to do physical exercise and walking, and they become obese. In some part of the country individuals not get space for walking because tremendous traffic and dearth of walkaway.
On the other hand, people should spend some time for walking, as it has numerous health benefits for them. Moreover, doctor must recommend all citizens to go for compulsory walk for at least 20 minutes per day because it enhance blood circulation and provide oxygen to the brain. Society secretary should organize walking camp and regular participating person must be rewarded with the gift. Furthermore, some charity can organised marathon so that maximum people can take advantage of walking and running.
To wrap up the discussion, I pen down saying that people should go for walk per day minimum 20 minutes as it has phenomenal merits for human body.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 222, Rule ID: IT_VBZ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'enhances'?
Suggestion: enhances
... at least 20 minutes per day because it enhance blood circulation and provide oxygen to...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
furthermore, hence, if, moreover, so, at least, such as, in spite of, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 13.1623246493 38% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 14.0 24.0651302605 58% => OK
Preposition: 25.0 41.998997996 60% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1180.0 1615.20841683 73% => OK
No of words: 233.0 315.596192385 74% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.0643776824 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.90696013833 4.20363070211 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.61307489384 2.80592935109 93% => OK
Unique words: 145.0 176.041082164 82% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.622317596567 0.561755894193 111% => OK
syllable_count: 373.5 506.74238477 74% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 30.0308868778 49.4020404114 61% => OK
Chars per sentence: 98.3333333333 106.682146367 92% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.4166666667 20.7667163134 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.25 7.06120827912 103% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.328058281561 0.244688304435 134% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.111255155669 0.084324248473 132% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0469425614845 0.0667982634062 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.192355673699 0.151304729494 127% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0445202940227 0.056905535591 78% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.1 13.0946893788 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 50.2224549098 104% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.07 12.4159519038 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.85 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 63.0 78.4519038076 80% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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