Many think that in today’s world it is very difficult for people to maintain a healthy lifestyle. Others, however, feel that it is easy for people to be healthy and fit if they want to be.
Discuss both views and give your opinion.
In recent years, modernity has altered lifestyles and work habits, making it difficult to maintain health and fitness. However, contrary to popular belief, it all relies on how a person spends their time, whether actively or passively. This essay will demonstrate that both views, as described in the statement, are correct.
To begin, a solitary man's existence entails a great deal of labour. However, he values other things more than health and is thus unable of maintaining a healthy lifestyle. However, if he invests a little time in his health, he will reap the benefits in the long run. Additionally, there are a slew of contemporary gadgets that contribute to a lack of physical activity. For instance, research indicates that a guy spends two hours of his daily life on social media rather than on the playground, and youngsters get used to these online activities, squandering their golden years of youth.
On the opposite side of the divide, individuals believe fitness is not a concern, that it is a way of life, and that they are used to regular activity. For example, elderly adults who remain healthy and seem younger than their years are used to morning walks since infancy. Second, they are oblivious to contemporary societal trends and ideals, and they generally consume healthful foods.
To summarize, keeping health is a significant challenge for individuals who work and spend their time on contemporary social media. In comparison, some engage in regular physical activity and consume nutritious foods rather than junk. Fitness, in my view, is not a problem if individuals begin exercising early in life and avoid fast food.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 293, Rule ID: THERE_RE_MANY[3]
Message: Possible agreement error. Did you mean 'slews'?
Suggestion: slews
...the long run. Additionally, there are a slew of contemporary gadgets that contribute...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, second, so, thus, for example, for instance, in my view
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 41.998997996 76% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1379.0 1615.20841683 85% => OK
No of words: 270.0 315.596192385 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.10740740741 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.05360046442 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.78557178168 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 165.0 176.041082164 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.611111111111 0.561755894193 109% => OK
syllable_count: 435.6 506.74238477 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 34.0789150206 49.4020404114 69% => OK
Chars per sentence: 98.5 106.682146367 92% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.2857142857 20.7667163134 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.21428571429 7.06120827912 74% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.112076297764 0.244688304435 46% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0355318383233 0.084324248473 42% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0337721073674 0.0667982634062 51% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0666856542465 0.151304729494 44% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0250262848669 0.056905535591 44% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.3 13.0946893788 94% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 50.2224549098 104% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.36 12.4159519038 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.2 8.58950901804 107% => OK
difficult_words: 79.0 78.4519038076 101% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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