Many think that in today’s world it is very difficult for people to maintain a healthy lifestyle. Others, however, feel that it is easy for people to be healthy and fit if they want to be.
Discuss both views and give your opinion.
In recent years, lifestyle and the tendency to work have been changed due to modernism, and it is hard to maintain health and fitness, while some masses thought, it depends on an individual that spends their time actively or with laziness. This essay will argue that both sides, which describe in the statement.
To begin with that life has plenty of workloads on a single man. However, he prefers other things, which has more importance than health and fallible to survive a healthy lifestyle, Although if he gives a little time for his health that repay in long terms. In addition, there is a plethora of modern devices that a reason for the lack of exercise. For example, research shows that a man spent two hours of his daily life browsing social websites rather than on the playground, and children are habitual these online games, so they waste their golden era of childhood.
On the other side of the wall, people have thought fitness is not an issue and it is a routine of life, and they are habitual of daily exercise. For instance, older people who are still fit and look younger than age, from their childhood they are used to morning walk from their young age. Secondly, they are unconscious of modern social styles and values, and mostly they eat healthy food in their life.
In conclusion, maintaining fitness is a big problem for people who have a workload and waste their time on modern social connections. In contrast, others exercise daily and take healthy food rather than junk food. In my opinion, fitness is not an issue if people start training from childhood and avoid fast food.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 4, column 215, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...ake healthy food rather than junk food. In my opinion, fitness is not an issue if ...
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Line 4, column 315, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ing from childhood and avoid fast food.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, look, second, secondly, so, still, while, for example, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, in contrast, in my opinion, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 7.85571142285 13% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 24.0651302605 112% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 41.998997996 79% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1326.0 1615.20841683 82% => OK
No of words: 280.0 315.596192385 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.73571428571 5.12529762239 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.09062348924 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.37632884414 2.80592935109 85% => OK
Unique words: 158.0 176.041082164 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.564285714286 0.561755894193 100% => OK
syllable_count: 400.5 506.74238477 79% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 0.809619238477 494% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 55.705076569 49.4020404114 113% => OK
Chars per sentence: 110.5 106.682146367 104% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.3333333333 20.7667163134 112% => OK
Discourse Markers: 12.5833333333 7.06120827912 178% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.212619838946 0.244688304435 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0763564644331 0.084324248473 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.040744786739 0.0667982634062 61% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.127710332367 0.151304729494 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0562489813056 0.056905535591 99% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.6 13.0946893788 96% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 65.05 50.2224549098 130% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.51 12.4159519038 85% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.16 8.58950901804 95% => OK
difficult_words: 60.0 78.4519038076 76% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 9.78957915832 138% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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