The Primary Goal of Technological advancement should be to increase people's efficiency so that they have more leisure time.
The Technology in growing world is vast concept. In all over world a day by day technology may developed. I Partially agree with the given argument as people efficiency increases as advancement happen in technology.
Technology plays major role in all sectors. Let's take example of manufacturing industry, previously Automobile engineer made an hand written program for any mechanical operation and if it somewhere fails then all part going to be scrap. but by current updated technology taking program and feeding into machine give exact output, so production improvement as well as time required for manufacturing also improved.
Advanced Technology in new cars, the more features are inbuilt. Features such as GPS system, locking system of door, even if driver forgot to seat belt then these all things are in built to reduce accidents, injuries. Even daily example if some one is new in city and he wants to meet xyz person, by just simply putting an address or any near by symbols persons find out easily. Currently e-bikes plays vital role for improving efficiency of persons. as there are electric charging required insted of petrol and desel so with reduction in pollution also human efficiency increase.
Even though technology may increase efficiency, there are several other factors may takes into consideration. Human can not be over dependant on technology, some advarse effect also may happen. Take Example of human pilot and auto pilot, if there is worst situation happen in time of landing, then human pilot may take correct decision of landing rather auto pilot take decision. In this situation insted of leisure time, more energy involved by human.
Let us take another example of smart phone, more and more technology improvement happen in smart phone more the person get involve in using. In all extent we say that human get wrapped in in advanced technology insted of geeting leisure time.
It is partially agree to say that human efficiency may goes increase, but at certain stage one cannot forgot that more ever involve in advancement of technology you can not get leisure time, insted you spend more and more time.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, may, so, then, well, such as, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 19.5258426966 51% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 12.4196629213 72% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 14.8657303371 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 11.3162921348 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 13.0 33.0505617978 39% => OK
Preposition: 47.0 58.6224719101 80% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 12.9106741573 93% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1803.0 2235.4752809 81% => OK
No of words: 352.0 442.535393258 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.12215909091 5.05705443957 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.33147354134 4.55969084622 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.63903023204 2.79657885939 94% => OK
Unique words: 197.0 215.323595506 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.559659090909 0.4932671777 113% => OK
syllable_count: 594.0 704.065955056 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.59117977528 107% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 6.24550561798 32% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.99550561798 40% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.10617977528 129% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.77640449438 113% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.38483146067 91% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 20.2370786517 89% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 23.0359550562 82% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 53.849728039 60.3974514979 89% => OK
Chars per sentence: 100.166666667 118.986275619 84% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.5555555556 23.4991977007 83% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.05555555556 5.21951772744 59% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.97078651685 121% => OK
Language errors: 10.0 7.80617977528 128% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 10.2758426966 136% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 5.13820224719 39% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.83258426966 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.258650410245 0.243740707755 106% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0866945766048 0.0831039109588 104% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0674034403808 0.0758088955206 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.144916834993 0.150359130593 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0544605959151 0.0667264976115 82% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.5 14.1392134831 88% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 43.73 48.8420337079 90% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 12.1743820225 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.42 12.1639044944 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.53 8.38706741573 102% => OK
difficult_words: 88.0 100.480337079 88% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.8971910112 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 11.2143820225 86% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.7820224719 76% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 66.67 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 4.0 Out of 6
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