A result of a survey is illustrated as a pictorial grouped bar chart, which depicts German, French, British, and Italian people’s expenditures in six different types of entertaining commodities namely, Photographic film, toys, Cds, perfumes, Tennis racquets, and personal stereos.
As depicted, in all groups British people spent the highest amount, comparing with the other three countries. Related to the aforementioned report, British photographic film marked the highest rank in-between group comparison with a number of 170, while British tennis racquets and personal stereos stand at the lowest position simultaneously, by 155.
In a quick cruise through the graph, overall photographic films bar was the main subject of households’ payment in all countries, excluding Italy’s expenses with around 155, which was almost lower than those of French and Italian, by around 2.5 worth more toys.
Overall, the domestic consumption of two lands, ranging from 150 and 145 to proximity 157 and 150, respectively, Italian and German’s expenditure have the lowest fluctuation. In contrast, a wide range of payments was experienced by the British from 155 to 170.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 262, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...rienced by the British from 155 to 170.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, so, while, in contrast
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.0 57% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 6.8 103% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.15609756098 63% => OK
Pronoun: 1.0 5.60731707317 18% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 33.7804878049 86% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.97073170732 101% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1001.0 965.302439024 104% => OK
No of words: 177.0 196.424390244 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.65536723164 4.92477711251 115% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.64748333727 3.73543355544 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.07644627601 2.65546596893 116% => OK
Unique words: 123.0 106.607317073 115% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.694915254237 0.547539520022 127% => OK
syllable_count: 276.3 283.868780488 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.45097560976 110% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.33902439024 69% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.482926829268 414% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 3.36585365854 149% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 6.0 8.94146341463 67% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 29.0 22.4926829268 129% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 75.7385854986 43.030603864 176% => OK
Chars per sentence: 166.833333333 112.824112599 148% => OK
Words per sentence: 29.5 22.9334400587 129% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.33333333333 5.23603664747 83% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 3.70975609756 27% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.13902439024 263% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.09268292683 49% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0378045698546 0.215688989381 18% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.020863610276 0.103423049105 20% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0243215073348 0.0843802449381 29% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0220446387186 0.15604864568 14% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0221521134054 0.0819641961636 27% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 20.0 13.2329268293 151% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.04 61.2550243902 69% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 6.51609756098 172% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.6 10.3012195122 142% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 16.14 11.4140731707 141% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.34 8.06136585366 128% => OK
difficult_words: 59.0 40.7170731707 145% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.0 11.4329268293 131% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.6 10.9970731707 124% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 11.0658536585 136% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.2359550562 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 9
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