The graph below shows the average number of UK commuters traveling each day by car, bus, or train between 1970 and 2030. Write a report for a university, lecturer describing the information shown below.
The pictorial diagram illustrates the UK commuters’ traveling choices over the years 1970 to 2021, as well as the prediction of this trend until 2030. As depicted, the commuters’ choice is divided into three main alternatives, namely, car, bus, and train.
One of the eye-catching features of the graph is the jobholders, who utilize their private cars to commute between home and office, which was approximately 5.2 million in 1970 and is predicted to touch around 9 million in 2030. The aforementioned trend has fluctuated between the years 2000 and 2020, which had experienced a bounce back in the year 2000, however, the trend is totally upward and could keep its first place among all trends as the first choice to citizens’ daily trip, over the 60 years. Moreover, train commuters trend experience an analogous trend, as the car had. Although the train trend is almost cover 50% less population, comparing to those of car trend covers. In addition, between the years 2000 to 2010 the number of trains’ commuters was constant, while that of the car trend has plummeted.
Another interesting feature is related to the bus, which has a contradictory trend, comparing to the two others reported trends. As can be seen, in 1970 there were at least 4 million people who traveled by bus, however, the trend was obviously downward and will mark less than 3 million in 2030.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, however, moreover, well, while, at least, in addition, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 5.0 24.0651302605 21% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 41.998997996 74% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1156.0 1615.20841683 72% => OK
No of words: 232.0 315.596192385 74% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.98275862069 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.90276135726 4.20363070211 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.75364583749 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 138.0 176.041082164 78% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.594827586207 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 319.5 506.74238477 63% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 5.43587174349 0% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 6.0 2.10420841683 285% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 16.0721442886 56% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 60.1284632996 49.4020404114 122% => OK
Chars per sentence: 128.444444444 106.682146367 120% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.7777777778 20.7667163134 124% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.0 7.06120827912 113% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.38176352705 68% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.185806819321 0.244688304435 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0934132456609 0.084324248473 111% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0427096074012 0.0667982634062 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.137826105731 0.151304729494 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0333523624769 0.056905535591 59% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.9 13.0946893788 114% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 63.02 50.2224549098 125% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.9 12.4159519038 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.01 8.58950901804 93% => OK
difficult_words: 46.0 78.4519038076 59% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.78957915832 143% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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