Recently, the phenomenon of extreme sports and their corresponding impacts has sparked a long-running dispute. In this regard, whereas some believe it should be ceased, others of the vantage point that engaging extreme sports are normative conduct among the so-called Z-Generation (ZG) due to many reasons. In my mind, although extreme sports have their specific benefits, their foresighted and unpredictable dangers can eclipse their benefits according to the following compelling reasons.
Nowadays, extreme sports such as parkour is a new trend of physical activity that most of the ZG wants to jump up on its bandwagon, while there are no written rules and regulations regarding age restriction or mental health level. Moreover, thanks to the easy and free access to drugs such as weed and the like in European countries like the Netherlands many teenagers and youth smoke it regularly. Consequently, they are not at the highest level of awareness during doing extreme sports. Pertinent to the aforementioned reason, statistics depict only in the year 2019, the number of sports injuries and death rose exponentially, doubled by 50%, compared to the five years before, from 2013 to 2018. Furthermore, investing profoundly in high-adrenalin activities, Red Bull and Monster energy drinks manufacturers play a significant role, in which these activities appeal more to youth while drinking high caffeine beverages. As a result, the conflict of the high rated beverage consumption in the body will cause many side effects later in middle age. To make it clear, scholarly research findings indicate that people who enjoy a high amount of adrenalin release due to the extreme activities, while consuming high-caffeinated beverages are mostly in danger of heart attack in their third decades of life.
However, modern society is amid technological improvements, state-of-the-art devices, and cutting-edge applications, which permeate the culture of being more sedentary. Thereby, increasing the rate of obesity, depression, anxiety, so on and so forth. Therefore, many parents or others who are responsible in various sectors of health care might appreciate it if their offspring being more active either by extreme sports or safer ones.
To sum up, despite the convincing reasons of extreme sports proponents, I opt to vigorously support the idea of banning extreme sports or applying more restricted rules and regulations as engaging in such activities might end up in death.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Probably a wrong construction: a/the + infinitive
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
consequently, furthermore, however, if, moreover, regarding, so, therefore, third, whereas, while, such as, as a result, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 10.4138276553 144% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 59.0 41.998997996 140% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2096.0 1615.20841683 130% => OK
No of words: 383.0 315.596192385 121% => OK
Chars per words: 5.4725848564 5.12529762239 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.42384287591 4.20363070211 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.06792400398 2.80592935109 109% => OK
Unique words: 243.0 176.041082164 138% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.634464751958 0.561755894193 113% => OK
syllable_count: 647.1 506.74238477 128% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 27.0 20.2975951904 133% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 53.650655701 49.4020404114 109% => OK
Chars per sentence: 149.714285714 106.682146367 140% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.3571428571 20.7667163134 132% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.28571428571 7.06120827912 132% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.16720707795 0.244688304435 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0537568126182 0.084324248473 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0428560030456 0.0667982634062 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.105631908924 0.151304729494 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.03503699379 0.056905535591 62% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 18.0 13.0946893788 137% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 35.61 50.2224549098 71% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.0 11.3001002004 133% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.74 12.4159519038 119% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.29 8.58950901804 120% => OK
difficult_words: 129.0 78.4519038076 164% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.78957915832 143% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 10.1190380762 126% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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