some people say that the more a product is advertised, the more a product will buy it. to what extent do you agree or disagree.
There is an opinion of some individuals that if the more goods is promoted the item would be purchased the more. I completely agree with this statement and I will give my review in this essay.
To begin with, The First reason for holding my view for the advertisement is that every person can obtain knowledge above the products. Because of the awareness about the goods, individuals can cultivate the knowledge based on the advertisement and they gain set up their mind that which product is launched lately and their requirement about their product which them gives knowledge. As a result, consumer who requires a perfect item, they might be select and know the features by looking at the advertisement.
Additionally, the second reason for the promotion of product is the clarity about the comparisons to deal with it. while consumer decide to buy worthy segments, they research the features and rates of that kind of item and become sure about designated products as well as compare those goods on TV, on the internet, pamphlet, and other advertisement mediums. Owing to this, individuals would get some ideas for the materialistic products after watching the comparison.
Lastly, the advertisements increase their market and consumerism. Though the product quality is bad, children get influence through the advertisements and they want those items. For instance, the advertisements of chocolates, fast foods as well as some health drinks attract children that will be bought all kinds of stuffs and market may surge as well as consumers too.
IN conclusion, it is clearly state that, I completely agree that people buy that kind of goods which are gained some information of newly introduced items. Moreover, individuals able to make right judgements about products which they really want. Furthermore, consumers such as offspring fascinate with advertisements and purchase the products as well as market also make profit.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, furthermore, if, lastly, look, may, moreover, really, second, so, well, while, as for, for instance, in conclusion, kind of, such as, as a result, as well as, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 7.0 157% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 1.00243902439 798% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 11.0 6.8 162% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 3.15609756098 412% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 30.0 5.60731707317 535% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 34.0 33.7804878049 101% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 3.97073170732 252% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1634.0 965.302439024 169% => OK
No of words: 311.0 196.424390244 158% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.2540192926 4.92477711251 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.19942759058 3.73543355544 112% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.91233493465 2.65546596893 110% => OK
Unique words: 172.0 106.607317073 161% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.553054662379 0.547539520022 101% => OK
syllable_count: 494.1 283.868780488 174% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.45097560976 110% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 1.53170731707 326% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 4.0 4.33902439024 92% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 1.07073170732 374% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 3.36585365854 149% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 8.94146341463 157% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 22.4926829268 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 53.7344661939 43.030603864 125% => OK
Chars per sentence: 116.714285714 112.824112599 103% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.2142857143 22.9334400587 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 13.2142857143 5.23603664747 252% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 3.83414634146 130% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 3.70975609756 297% => Less positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.09268292683 49% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.244268707665 0.215688989381 113% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0828440220601 0.103423049105 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0416045918207 0.0843802449381 49% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.140911617044 0.15604864568 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0359931513308 0.0819641961636 44% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.4 13.2329268293 109% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 61.2550243902 80% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 10.3012195122 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.17 11.4140731707 115% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.43 8.06136585366 105% => OK
difficult_words: 73.0 40.7170731707 179% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 11.4329268293 127% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.9970731707 98% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 11.0658536585 136% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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