"prevention is better than cure".
out of the country's health budget. a large proportion should be diverted from treatment to spending on health education and prevention measures. to what extent do you agree or disagree?
"Prevention is better than cure". this statement is far better for country's health. The nation's money have to payout for physical qualification rather than healing. I completely agree with this view and I will state my reasons in following paragraphs.
To begin with, the main reason for fitness education is that the junk food or western culinary skills. It is an essential about fitness education because in this fast paced life most of the individuals adopt western food style and they forgot the value of nutrition's facts and they leads to junk foods rather than a quick making traditional foods with full of vitamins and minerals. As a result, without nutrition education they would be more impacted in their body which would leads to a bad disorder.
Moreover, majority of young people work as aged persons. Because of lack knowledge of good health and proper diet, young individuals have to suffer with serious disorder and they have inability to work with strength like an adult one. For instance, several sicknesses might be entered like blood pressure, diabetes, and thyroid etc. in early stage of life because of lack health education.
Finally, teenagers habituate with narcotics rather than exercises. Country's budget spend in smoking, drinks, and another bad addiction which is not virtuous for physical conditions and for this condition, health organizers have to support education system for the knowledge of exercises and other health related problems as well as should inculcate knowledge about exercises. Owing to this, country's budget might be expended in gym and health education system and prevent the fitness of all the regimes.
In conclusion, I strongly believe that fitness is the most important rather than spend money in treatment. Though, the advancement in lifestyle and cutthroat lifestyle we have to prevent our body with good nutrition with good qualifications in good well-being. What is more, every individuals should spend their savings in health institutes, gym as well as in good diet.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: This
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Suggestion: nations'; nation's
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Suggestion: lead
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Message: The verb 'would' requires the base form of the verb: 'lead'
Suggestion: lead
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
finally, if, moreover, so, well, for instance, in conclusion, as a result, as well as, to begin with, what is more
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 41.998997996 105% => OK
Nominalization: 16.0 8.3376753507 192% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1721.0 1615.20841683 107% => OK
No of words: 325.0 315.596192385 103% => OK
Chars per words: 5.29538461538 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.24591054749 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.73906648461 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 172.0 176.041082164 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.529230769231 0.561755894193 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 512.1 506.74238477 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 73.1533914806 49.4020404114 148% => OK
Chars per sentence: 101.235294118 106.682146367 95% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.1176470588 20.7667163134 92% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.70588235294 7.06120827912 95% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.22971216759 0.244688304435 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.079287287044 0.084324248473 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0691845049876 0.0667982634062 104% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.131701004508 0.151304729494 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0696698096353 0.056905535591 122% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.1 13.0946893788 100% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 50.2224549098 104% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.46 12.4159519038 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.22 8.58950901804 96% => OK
difficult_words: 75.0 78.4519038076 96% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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