Write about the following topic.
Young people in the modern world seem to have more power and influence than any previous young generation.
Why is this the case?
What impact does this have on the relationship between old and young people?
Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
You should write at least 254 words.
The modern world is an oyester for the young and new generation. The new generation have more influence on not only their own surroundings but also on the political and global issues. The previous generations hold both a grudge and a positive outlook on the new ones as the youngsters these days seems aloof yet have a strong mindset on various topics.
Today's world is curved out of internet and social media presence. The teens and young adults are both the audience and the performer of this virtual stage. But the old generation merely treats them as a clown in the king's court because of the excessive posting on TikTok, Youtube or any other social media and the narscisistic amount of selfies they take on a daily basis. But is this all the young people do all day everyday?
If you take a closer look, you will see behind the stereotypical personalization of the youth. You will find the people who are supporting the 'Black Lives Matter' or 'LGBTQ Rights' campain are the same people who spend the most of their time on social media. The very same people are using the modern technologies to create a start-up or invent a new software. Even in the recent pandemic situation, when the world stood still, the very same teens who used to sit in their homes and played video games all day, came out on the streets to help and spread awareness of the deadly disease. The recent vaccine for CoVid-19 only took two years to complete whereas it took 10+ years to irradicate deadly diseases like plague or smallpox. This was only possible as the new youths have more opportunities on their hands as they have access to the modern and improved technologies that was not available before. In Bangladesh, internet banking facilities like Bkash, Nogod or Rocket became possible due to the new enteprenuers who took risk.
Like it has been mentioned before, the old and the new have a 'love-hate' relationship with each other. However, the 'hate' part of the relationship is now changing. The previous generation is understanding where the new youths stand, their ideals and point of views.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 185, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...lso on the political and global issues. The previous generations hold both a grudge...
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Line 3, column 418, Rule ID: EVERYDAY_EVERY_DAY[3]
Message: 'Everyday' is an adjective. Did you mean 'every day'?
Suggestion: every day
...is this all the young people do all day everyday? If you take a closer look, you will...
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Line 7, column 187, Rule ID: PROGRESSIVE_VERBS[1]
Message: This verb is normally not used in the progressive form. Try a simple form instead.
...s now changing. The previous generation is understanding where the new youths stand, their ideal...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, look, so, still, whereas
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 21.0 10.4138276553 202% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1724.0 1615.20841683 107% => OK
No of words: 362.0 315.596192385 115% => OK
Chars per words: 4.76243093923 5.12529762239 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.36191444098 4.20363070211 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.57670697231 2.80592935109 92% => OK
Unique words: 197.0 176.041082164 112% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.544198895028 0.561755894193 97% => OK
syllable_count: 530.1 506.74238477 105% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 10.0 2.52805611222 396% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 51.0939158344 49.4020404114 103% => OK
Chars per sentence: 101.411764706 106.682146367 95% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.2941176471 20.7667163134 103% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.82352941176 7.06120827912 40% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 3.4128256513 205% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.254296924921 0.244688304435 104% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0787166732645 0.084324248473 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0584776324712 0.0667982634062 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.150493948959 0.151304729494 99% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.044967507847 0.056905535591 79% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.6 13.0946893788 89% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 50.2224549098 117% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.33 12.4159519038 83% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.52 8.58950901804 99% => OK
difficult_words: 88.0 78.4519038076 112% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.