Nowadays, many people choose to be self-employed, rather than to work for a company or organization.
Why might this be the case? What could be the disadvantages of being self-employed?
These days, an increasing number of people opt to work for their own business, instead of participating an agency. There are some reasons to explain why this takes place, and this kind of employment will have some drawbacks.
People decide to be self-employed for some reasons. The first reason is that the modern labor market is extremely competitive. They may need to be outstanding and make a better impression than others to be selected, which can be a weakness for some who do not have an excellent competence. Therefore, to avoid competition in application process, they establish their company. That people would like to have freedom to develop their creation is another reason. If they work at a company, they must follow its directions. In contrast, in self-employment, they can take advantage of their ability to lead their business into a new path.
Although self-employment seems to be beneficial, it can pose some difficulties. Firstly, it takes more efforts to operate a company. This is because they can take over most of positions in their organizations, which can make them exhausted. My cousin, for example, is an English teacher, who decided to set up her own center instead of working for another one. She takes responsibilities of all duties ranging from a teacher, a seller to an accountant. The second drawback is that they can have an unstable source of income. At companies, they complete your duties and receive salary on a monthly basis. Whereas, if your company are under financial crisis, the resource can be utilized to solve such difficulties, your income will be affected as a result.
In conclusion, people decide not to apply for a company and set up their own business for a number of reasons, but there are a few disadvantages in self-employment which should be taken into account.
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Comments
Essay evaluations by e-grader
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 169, Rule ID: MOST_SOME_OF_NNS[1]
Message: After 'most of', you should use 'the' ('most of the positions') or simply say ''most positions''.
Suggestion: most of the positions; most positions
...any. This is because they can take over most of positions in their organizations, which can make ...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, if, may, second, so, therefore, whereas, for example, in conclusion, in contrast, kind of, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 7.85571142285 178% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 32.0 24.0651302605 133% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1519.0 1615.20841683 94% => OK
No of words: 304.0 315.596192385 96% => OK
Chars per words: 4.99671052632 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.17559525986 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.04069631083 2.80592935109 108% => OK
Unique words: 171.0 176.041082164 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.5625 0.561755894193 100% => OK
syllable_count: 479.7 506.74238477 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 13.0 5.43587174349 239% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 38.3872808797 49.4020404114 78% => OK
Chars per sentence: 84.3888888889 106.682146367 79% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.8888888889 20.7667163134 81% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.83333333333 7.06120827912 97% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 3.4128256513 205% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.293332037659 0.244688304435 120% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.094277117386 0.084324248473 112% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.120652382964 0.0667982634062 181% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.200868703497 0.151304729494 133% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.061108274614 0.056905535591 107% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.6 13.0946893788 81% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 55.24 50.2224549098 110% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.42 12.4159519038 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.48 8.58950901804 99% => OK
difficult_words: 78.0 78.4519038076 99% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 169, Rule ID: MOST_SOME_OF_NNS[1]
Message: After 'most of', you should use 'the' ('most of the positions') or simply say ''most positions''.
Suggestion: most of the positions; most positions
...any. This is because they can take over most of positions in their organizations, which can make ...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, if, may, second, so, therefore, whereas, for example, in conclusion, in contrast, kind of, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 7.85571142285 178% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 32.0 24.0651302605 133% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1519.0 1615.20841683 94% => OK
No of words: 304.0 315.596192385 96% => OK
Chars per words: 4.99671052632 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.17559525986 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.04069631083 2.80592935109 108% => OK
Unique words: 171.0 176.041082164 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.5625 0.561755894193 100% => OK
syllable_count: 479.7 506.74238477 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 13.0 5.43587174349 239% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 38.3872808797 49.4020404114 78% => OK
Chars per sentence: 84.3888888889 106.682146367 79% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.8888888889 20.7667163134 81% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.83333333333 7.06120827912 97% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 3.4128256513 205% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.293332037659 0.244688304435 120% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.094277117386 0.084324248473 112% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.120652382964 0.0667982634062 181% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.200868703497 0.151304729494 133% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.061108274614 0.056905535591 107% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.6 13.0946893788 81% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 55.24 50.2224549098 110% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.42 12.4159519038 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.48 8.58950901804 99% => OK
difficult_words: 78.0 78.4519038076 99% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.