In spite of the advances made in agriculture, many people around the world still go hungry.
Why is this the case?
What can be done about this problem?
These days, people are applying numerous technological developments to cultivation, but a large number of people do not have enough food. There could be several reasons why this takes place, and I believe that some possible solutions can be done to tackle this issue.
Several reasons are resulting in a shortage of food for some people. The first reason is unemployment. If people are out of work, they cannot have a source of income. As a result, many live in poverty, which makes them often cannot afford food. Another reason is climate change, which leads to a variety of extreme weather events. They can have detrimental effects on food production and cause famine as a result. For example, in the western provinces of Vietnam, prolonged droughts result in a shortage of water, so farmers can not water their crops.
However, several actions could be taken to mitigate the problem mentioned above. Firstly, it is necessary to create more job opportunities, which helps reduce the rate of poverty. When people get a job, they can have the ability to take care of their life, including buying food. Another solution is that government should establish an early warning system, which gives farmers more time to prepare for adverse weather patterns. These can protect their harvest from being damaged.
In conclusion, various reasons are leading to famine in some places, even though several advances have been used in agriculture; however, some measures can be implemented to deal with this problem.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 89, Rule ID: LARGE_NUMBER_OF[1]
Message: Specify a number, remove phrase, or simply use 'many' or 'numerous'
Suggestion: many; numerous
...ogical developments to cultivation, but a large number of people do not have enough food. There c...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, however, if, so, for example, in conclusion, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 10.4138276553 29% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 41.998997996 69% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1258.0 1615.20841683 78% => OK
No of words: 247.0 315.596192385 78% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.09311740891 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.96437052324 4.20363070211 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.59228843886 2.80592935109 92% => OK
Unique words: 156.0 176.041082164 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.631578947368 0.561755894193 112% => OK
syllable_count: 401.4 506.74238477 79% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 41.6660799959 49.4020404114 84% => OK
Chars per sentence: 83.8666666667 106.682146367 79% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.4666666667 20.7667163134 79% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.13333333333 7.06120827912 73% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.9879759519 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.17229561478 0.244688304435 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0530023818905 0.084324248473 63% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0663254224088 0.0667982634062 99% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.123161014669 0.151304729494 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0708451395255 0.056905535591 124% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.8 13.0946893788 82% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 55.24 50.2224549098 110% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.95 12.4159519038 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.71 8.58950901804 101% => OK
difficult_words: 67.0 78.4519038076 85% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.78957915832 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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