Some people say that playing computer games is bad for children,whereas others say that it has positive effects on the way children develop.Discuss both sides and give your opinion.
Nowadays, most of children allured by video games.Therefore,video games have wide range of effects on the entire development of children.Although, according to some people video games puts adverse effect on the mental and physical behaviour of children, others are opposit to this. I think, it is helpful for mental growth but it acts as a curse for physical development.
To embark with, video games assist children for their mental growth. First of all, through video games children learn several things related to particular subject and also helps to build the interest in one particular skill. For example, puzzle games make children mental strong and help them to learn new words. Likewise, video games related to farming, driving, painting, shooting, chess help them to choose their interested field. In short, video games work as a base for learning new things.
On the other hand, according to those people who think video games puts negative effects on child 's development, they strongly believe that video games are obstacles in the path of physical growth. In other words, nowadays, children are more attracted towards video games as compare to physical activities or outdoor games. As a result, they remained physical weak and their parts of bodies are not as developed as it should be. Futhermore, it effect on their eyes. To illustrate, a survey was conducted by the department of health care,Beijing university,China in april 2019 that 90% of patients who visit eyes clinics for the checkup of their eyes are children aged between 6-18.Therefor, some people deny to give video games to their children.
In my opinion,although video games have several advantages, its drawbacks can not be overlooked. For solving this problem parenta play a major role, its their duty to limit the hours of playing video games.
To conclude, despite having some negative effects of video games, there benefits are much more if one should use it in a limited way. So,parents must take it seriously for mentally and physically fit children.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, likewise, look, so, therefore, for example, i think, in short, as a result, first of all, in my opinion, in other words, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 26.0 24.0651302605 108% => OK
Preposition: 45.0 41.998997996 107% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1717.0 1615.20841683 106% => OK
No of words: 331.0 315.596192385 105% => OK
Chars per words: 5.18731117825 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.26537283232 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.88637137776 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 184.0 176.041082164 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.555891238671 0.561755894193 99% => OK
syllable_count: 523.8 506.74238477 103% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 10.0 4.76152304609 210% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 69.8041624386 49.4020404114 141% => OK
Chars per sentence: 107.3125 106.682146367 101% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.6875 20.7667163134 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.0 7.06120827912 142% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 21.0 5.01903807615 418% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.254265449754 0.244688304435 104% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0945121295836 0.084324248473 112% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0533624750917 0.0667982634062 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.158802410095 0.151304729494 105% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0538605959319 0.056905535591 95% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.4 13.0946893788 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.82 12.4159519038 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.21 8.58950901804 96% => OK
difficult_words: 75.0 78.4519038076 96% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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