A person should never make an important decision alone
No one can deny that making decisions can prove to be challenging. In my opinion, one should always make decisions with someone, and never alone. I feel this for two reasons, which I will be exploring in the subsequent paragraphs.
To being with, making decisions can be stressful. The stress associated with making decisions can even be the cause of anxiety, affecting the mental health of the individual negatively along with the physical health. But if the individual consults someone or asks someone to help them make decisions, this stress and anxiety will be reduced. For example, when my friend had to make a decision to choose a college, he was stressed, frustrated. His application deadline was approaching fast. He lost his weight, he performed poorly in every test, he was kicked off his basketball team. After taking my advise of consulting a career conselor, he finally made the decision to join one of the ivy colleges. If he had never consulted the conselor, made his decision alone, he would have ended up with irrecoverable damages.
Secondly, asking for someone’s help while making a decision, can provide the individual with more insights of the topic or field. Usually, the person, one asks for help in making a life changing decision is more experienced. They have more knowledge about the person as well as life in general, they known the ins and outs, the negatives and the positives of making a certain decision. I remember when I asked my father to help me make decision about dropping out of school and establishing a startup. He is a businessman by profession. He pointed out some positive aspects of starting my own business but he also mentioned negative aspects about dropping out of school. He knew my strengths and weakness. The insights he provided me, compled me to view my decision into a new light and perspective. He helped me to make the decision of staying the school and working part time on my business idea. This is the perfect example of how people can help one in making decisions by pointing them in right direction.
In the light of the above mentioned reasons, I absolutely disagree that a person should make decisions alone. This is because, asking for help can reduce the stress and other people can provide valuable inputs.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Did you mean 'begin'?
Suggestion: begin
...ing in the subsequent paragraphs. To being with, making decisions can be stressful...
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Line 3, column 601, Rule ID: GIVE_ADVISE[3]
Message: Did you mean 'advice' (a noun)?
Suggestion: advice
...ff his basketball team. After taking my advise of consulting a career conselor, he fin...
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Line 5, column 672, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...e aspects about dropping out of school. He knew my strengths and weakness. The ins...
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Line 5, column 869, Rule ID: EN_COMPOUNDS
Message: This word is normally spelled with hyphen.
Suggestion: part-time
...ision of staying the school and working part time on my business idea. This is the perfec...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, if, second, secondly, so, well, while, for example, i feel, in general, as well as, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 15.1003584229 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 9.8082437276 133% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 13.8261648746 94% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 11.0286738351 45% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 44.0 43.0788530466 102% => OK
Preposition: 47.0 52.1666666667 90% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.0752688172 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1899.0 1977.66487455 96% => OK
No of words: 388.0 407.700716846 95% => OK
Chars per words: 4.89432989691 4.8611393121 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.43821085614 4.48103885553 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.72975377852 2.67179642975 102% => OK
Unique words: 194.0 212.727598566 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.5 0.524837075471 95% => OK
syllable_count: 598.5 618.680645161 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 19.0 9.59856630824 198% => OK
Article: 4.0 3.08781362007 130% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 23.0 20.6003584229 112% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.1344086022 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 34.6894949315 48.9658058833 71% => OK
Chars per sentence: 82.5652173913 100.406767564 82% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.8695652174 20.6045352989 82% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.08695652174 5.45110844103 93% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.5376344086 72% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 11.8709677419 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 10.0 3.85842293907 259% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.88709677419 102% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.222336493424 0.236089414692 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0806983215008 0.076458572812 106% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0787661572545 0.0737576698707 107% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.16283299858 0.150856017488 108% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0262519863221 0.0645574589148 41% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.0 11.7677419355 85% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 63.7 58.1214874552 110% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 10.1575268817 83% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.79 10.9000537634 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.05 8.01818996416 100% => OK
difficult_words: 89.0 86.8835125448 102% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 10.002688172 65% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.0537634409 84% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 66.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 20.0 Out of 30
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