Some people think the increasing business and cultural contact between countries brings many positive effects. Others say it causes the loss of national identities. Discuss both view and give your opinion.
.Never have economic co-operation and cultural exchange been so common among people as this era. Although globalization is immensely beneficial for economies in the world, this development is potential to be the main threat of culture loss in many countries. From my perspective, I believe this activity brings more pros than cons since it possesses numerous positive affects on the whole world’s economy
On the one hand, globalization can bring a large scale of shortcomings mainly associated with brain drain and corrosion of national values. In more detail, owing to the higher living standards and wages in developed countries, a vast majority of people decide to migrant to these places in order to elevate their lifestyles, which leads to a problem of excessive migrants of many upper-countries, meanwhile decreases in employments of developing ones. Moreover, many youngsters nowadays show strong preferences towards western culture regarding music, fashion, movie, and so on, and neglect the beauty and value of their own national identities. As a result, many traditions and cultures will potentially vanish at some point in the future due to the dominance of foreign culture
On the other hand, a borderless world can be of tremendous benefit for the economy since it can not only raise the job opportunities but also facilitate the global commerce. The development of globalization results in more and more multinational companies are established as well as increases the demand for employees in new careers. For instance, thanks to globalization, Samsung can build one of its factories in Vietnam and help many indigenous people employed by working in their places. In addition, it is also more convenient and easier for the operation of worldwide commerce, leading to higher investment and support received by developing countries
To conclude, while negativity can be seen in the process of relationship-tightening between countries, with regard to brain drain and culture loss, globalizaion greatly supports the world’s economy and increases the employment rate of many nations. In my opinion, I suppose the advantages of this phenomenon can way more overperform the drawbacks
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, moreover, regarding, so, well, while, for instance, i suppose, in addition, as a result, as well as, in my opinion, on the whole, with regard to, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 7.30460921844 14% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 56.0 41.998997996 133% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.3376753507 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1867.0 1615.20841683 116% => OK
No of words: 341.0 315.596192385 108% => OK
Chars per words: 5.47507331378 5.12529762239 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.29722995808 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.21277024647 2.80592935109 114% => OK
Unique words: 206.0 176.041082164 117% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.604105571848 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 588.6 506.74238477 116% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 9.0 4.76152304609 189% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 34.0 20.2975951904 168% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 101.627801314 49.4020404114 206% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 186.7 106.682146367 175% => OK
Words per sentence: 34.1 20.7667163134 164% => OK
Discourse Markers: 17.8 7.06120827912 252% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.154786980279 0.244688304435 63% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0603048383827 0.084324248473 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0241326036361 0.0667982634062 36% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0949825143383 0.151304729494 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.025164579188 0.056905535591 44% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 21.4 13.0946893788 163% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 28.51 50.2224549098 57% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 13.0 7.44779559118 175% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 17.7 11.3001002004 157% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.1 12.4159519038 122% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.69 8.58950901804 124% => OK
difficult_words: 116.0 78.4519038076 148% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 16.0 9.78957915832 163% => OK
gunning_fog: 15.6 10.1190380762 154% => OK
text_standard: 16.0 10.7795591182 148% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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