The Table below shows the results of a survey that asked 6800 Scottish adults (aged 16 years and over) whether they had taken part in different cultural activities in the past 12 months.
Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
The table compares participation in six cultural activities of 6800 Scottish people who aged 16 and above, in 12 months
Overall, each age group had different attitudes towards these activities. However, a same tendency was reported in terms of any writing and computer based when with the exception of people from 16 to 24, these activities did not sound really attractive to others
People between 16 to 24 showed a strong preference towards any performance with 35% of them took part in these activities, which was 13% higher than that of the age group from 25 to 44 years old. Visual arts was also really popular when it was chosen by 30% of the adolecents from 16 to 24. While 17% of these people participated in writing, the remaining acitivities just attracted around 10% to 11% of them. With regards to the adults between 25 to 44, the fgure for undertaking crafts, cultural purchases and visual arts was nearly even, which was around 16 to 17% while the remaning figures were not over 10%
In contrast, undertaking any craft was the most favourite cultural activities for people from 45 to 74 years old when it was took part in by 22% of them. Moreover, 17% and 18% of them decided to join in any performance and cultural purchases respectively with their least popular activities allocated to writing and computer based, both had a same figure of 5%. People aged 16 and over also bore some
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 161, Rule ID: WITH_THE_EXCEPTION_OF[1]
Message: Use simply 'except' or 'except for'
Suggestion: except; except for
... of any writing and computer based when with the exception of people from 16 to 24, these activities ...
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Line 4, column 126, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'taken'.
Suggestion: taken
...ple from 45 to 74 years old when it was took part in by 22% of them. Moreover, 17% a...
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Line 4, column 401, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
.... People aged 16 and over also bore some
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, however, if, moreover, really, so, while, as to, in contrast
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 7.0 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 6.8 103% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 3.15609756098 222% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 12.0 5.60731707317 214% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 48.0 33.7804878049 142% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.97073170732 126% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1160.0 965.302439024 120% => OK
No of words: 245.0 196.424390244 125% => OK
Chars per words: 4.73469387755 4.92477711251 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.95632099841 3.73543355544 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.61802930994 2.65546596893 99% => OK
Unique words: 130.0 106.607317073 122% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.530612244898 0.547539520022 97% => OK
syllable_count: 347.4 283.868780488 122% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.33902439024 92% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 8.94146341463 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 35.0 22.4926829268 156% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 121.394280873 43.030603864 282% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 165.714285714 112.824112599 147% => OK
Words per sentence: 35.0 22.9334400587 153% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.42857142857 5.23603664747 180% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 1.69756097561 177% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 3.70975609756 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.09268292683 49% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.184864075378 0.215688989381 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0964733460601 0.103423049105 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0827043298106 0.0843802449381 98% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.148625900193 0.15604864568 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.076055445464 0.0819641961636 93% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 18.3 13.2329268293 138% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.87 61.2550243902 86% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 6.51609756098 172% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.6 10.3012195122 142% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.75 11.4140731707 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.4 8.06136585366 104% => OK
difficult_words: 47.0 40.7170731707 115% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 28.5 11.4329268293 249% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 16.0 10.9970731707 145% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.0658536585 99% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.