Success is often measured by wealth and material belongings. Do you think wealth is the best measure of success ? what makes a successful person?
It has often been noticed that if you have a mansion or big branded car, people will love to be your friend, thinking that you have successful life. I believe that working hard take to your goal that is directly proportional to making lucrative money. Also, there are other elements that makes a person happy and happiness is also a key constituent of victory.
To begin with, it has been noticed that if you are living in a villa with all modcons. Also, if you are spendthrift and have earned your name in top most list of billionaire you will be counted as successful man or women. Tgis lucrative money is earned by working hard. For instance, Bill Gates a renowned name that everyone is aware of now who developed the software is counted in the topmost successful and most earning personality
On the other hand, it is very well known that factors like happiness, dedication and focused plays a vital role in being successful. No matter how much you earn and if you do not know how to grow with right strategy and your diligent work, you will lose your name and fame in one go. For example, a recent news of Raj Kundra, a big business man has stunned everyone because he was earning good money from pornography. Moreover, people used to consider him business tycoon but he used the shortcut for getting more money. He destroyed his entire career and name. At the same time a well known name Mirabai chanu, who has won silver medal for India proved that wealth is not only the way to measure success.
To recapitulate, I would rather say that when people get success in most of the cases they get rewarded in terms of money, however it is not the case with every person. Few people who love to dedicate their entire life helping poor people are also the successful person from their point of view because what they dreamt they achieved.
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Essay evaluations by e-grader
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 298, Rule ID: A_UNCOUNTABLE[3]
Message: Uncountable nouns are usually not used with an indefinite article. Use simply 'recent news'.
Suggestion: recent news
...r name and fame in one go. For example, a recent news of Raj Kundra, a big business man has s...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, moreover, so, well, for example, for instance, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 13.1623246493 137% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 14.0 7.30460921844 192% => OK
Pronoun: 39.0 24.0651302605 162% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 33.0 41.998997996 79% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1518.0 1615.20841683 94% => OK
No of words: 332.0 315.596192385 105% => OK
Chars per words: 4.57228915663 5.12529762239 89% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.2685907696 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.34822337045 2.80592935109 84% => OK
Unique words: 191.0 176.041082164 108% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.575301204819 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 483.3 506.74238477 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 60.4289513666 49.4020404114 122% => OK
Chars per sentence: 108.428571429 106.682146367 102% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.7142857143 20.7667163134 114% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.35714285714 7.06120827912 104% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.230194957049 0.244688304435 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0673440165755 0.084324248473 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.061317636861 0.0667982634062 92% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.134063014171 0.151304729494 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0178141407872 0.056905535591 31% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.9 13.0946893788 91% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 56.59 50.2224549098 113% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.52 12.4159519038 77% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.96 8.58950901804 93% => OK
difficult_words: 67.0 78.4519038076 85% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 298, Rule ID: A_UNCOUNTABLE[3]
Message: Uncountable nouns are usually not used with an indefinite article. Use simply 'recent news'.
Suggestion: recent news
...r name and fame in one go. For example, a recent news of Raj Kundra, a big business man has s...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, moreover, so, well, for example, for instance, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 13.1623246493 137% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 14.0 7.30460921844 192% => OK
Pronoun: 39.0 24.0651302605 162% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 33.0 41.998997996 79% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1518.0 1615.20841683 94% => OK
No of words: 332.0 315.596192385 105% => OK
Chars per words: 4.57228915663 5.12529762239 89% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.2685907696 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.34822337045 2.80592935109 84% => OK
Unique words: 191.0 176.041082164 108% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.575301204819 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 483.3 506.74238477 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 60.4289513666 49.4020404114 122% => OK
Chars per sentence: 108.428571429 106.682146367 102% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.7142857143 20.7667163134 114% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.35714285714 7.06120827912 104% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.230194957049 0.244688304435 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0673440165755 0.084324248473 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.061317636861 0.0667982634062 92% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.134063014171 0.151304729494 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0178141407872 0.056905535591 31% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.9 13.0946893788 91% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 56.59 50.2224549098 113% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.52 12.4159519038 77% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.96 8.58950901804 93% => OK
difficult_words: 67.0 78.4519038076 85% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.