Nowadays young people have the tendency to stay at home rather than going out for outdoor activities Discuss the causes and solutions to this phenomenon

Grammar and spelling errors:
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Nowadays, many young people tend to stay...
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... I do not agree with this situation. Firstly, Ill go over some of the benefit...
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Suggestion: I'll
... this situation. Firstly, Ill go over some of the benefits of staying...
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...s situation. Firstly, Ill go over some of the benefits of staying at...
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Suggestion: some
...ion. Firstly, Ill go over some of the benefits of staying at home. It cannot ...
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...pend on paid activities like gym, soccer,.... nowadays technology has developed ve...
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...is really bad for their development. On the other hand, I affirm that being o...
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Suggestion: Community
...eople to participate in the activities. community activities by organizing events such as...
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Suggestion: Both
...attract a lot of people to participate. both financial benefits for the organizers a...
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...rs and improved community relations. In summary, it is a wrong choice for you...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, if, may, moreover, really, so, in addition, in summary, such as, you know, on the other hand

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 7.30460921844 164% => OK
Pronoun: 38.0 24.0651302605 158% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 48.0 41.998997996 114% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1735.0 1615.20841683 107% => OK
No of words: 355.0 315.596192385 112% => OK
Chars per words: 4.88732394366 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.34067318298 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.86493414397 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 177.0 176.041082164 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.498591549296 0.561755894193 89% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 552.6 506.74238477 109% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 16.0721442886 131% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 42.5321007221 49.4020404114 86% => OK
Chars per sentence: 82.619047619 106.682146367 77% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.9047619048 20.7667163134 81% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.66666666667 7.06120827912 80% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 10.0 5.01903807615 199% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 8.67935871743 161% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.286217694444 0.244688304435 117% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0889237845726 0.084324248473 105% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0718258886129 0.0667982634062 108% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.213760887072 0.151304729494 141% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0470008426221 0.056905535591 83% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.1 13.0946893788 77% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 55.24 50.2224549098 110% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.79 12.4159519038 87% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.05 8.58950901804 82% => OK
difficult_words: 59.0 78.4519038076 75% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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