The table below shows statistics about the top five countries for international tourism in 2012 and 2013

The table compares five major countries in terms of number of tourists and tourist expenditures over two years of period.

Overall, over the span of two years, the number of tourists and revenue earned from it increased significantly where only Chaina showed a different trend. it is also seen that France is the most popular tourist destination among the five places. However, The highest revenue was made by the USA.

From a detail analysis, in 2012, 83 million people visited France but later in 2013 this figure rose dramatically to 94.7 million which is around 12 million more visitors. The same trend was followed by the rest of the countries except Chaina. Where the numbers for the USA and Spain increased approximately 3 millions and Italy saw around a 2 millions rise, Chaina experienced a decline which from 57.7 millions in 2012 to 56.7 millions in 2013.

On the other hand, the figure for the tourist spendings in USA was 126.2 billions in 2012 and later in 2013, with an increasement of around 9 billion dollars, it stood at 139.6 billions. Sabsequently, France, Spain and Itali witnessed the similar trend saw a rise near about 2 to 4 billions over the time. Interestingly, inspite of a decline in number of tourists, China earned almost 2 billion more money than the previous year.

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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, so, on the other hand

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.0 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 6.8 103% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.15609756098 158% => OK
Pronoun: 5.0 5.60731707317 89% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 33.7804878049 115% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.97073170732 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1085.0 965.302439024 112% => OK
No of words: 222.0 196.424390244 113% => OK
Chars per words: 4.88738738739 4.92477711251 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.8600083453 3.73543355544 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.66004244812 2.65546596893 100% => OK
Unique words: 130.0 106.607317073 122% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.585585585586 0.547539520022 107% => OK
syllable_count: 320.4 283.868780488 113% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 5.0 4.33902439024 115% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 3.36585365854 149% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 8.94146341463 112% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 22.4926829268 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 47.4569278399 43.030603864 110% => OK
Chars per sentence: 108.5 112.824112599 96% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.2 22.9334400587 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.5 5.23603664747 86% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 1.69756097561 236% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 3.70975609756 162% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.09268292683 98% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.141173298528 0.215688989381 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.051291573989 0.103423049105 50% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0352406065542 0.0843802449381 42% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.083300396944 0.15604864568 53% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0248916858416 0.0819641961636 30% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.7 13.2329268293 96% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 66.07 61.2550243902 108% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 10.3012195122 92% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.08 11.4140731707 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.21 8.06136585366 102% => OK
difficult_words: 49.0 40.7170731707 120% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.4329268293 96% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.9970731707 98% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.0658536585 99% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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