In some countries, small town-centre shops are going out of business because people tend to drive to large out-of-town stores. As a result, people without cars have limited access to out-of town stores, and it may result in an increase in the use of cars. Do you think the disadvantages of this change outweigh its advantages?
In many countries in the world, small shops in city centers have to suffer from intense competition with large stores that are based in the suburb, therefore, many of those small businesses are threatened with bankrupcies. This leads to a number of consequences, involving a rise in car usage and limited access to large out-of-town for those without cars. In my point of view, its cons can totally overshadow its pros
On the one hand, this change in people’s shopping preference may encourage them to move to areas outside their town to live. Given the fact that modern cities are facing with overpopulation, entailing extreme pressure on the housing supply system. As a result, the development of out-of-town stores can be a great method to tackle this problem when people tend to settle down around these shops for convenience. In addition, this also improves the traffic situation in these towns as the more people flock to out-of-town areas, the less heavy the inner-town traffic congestion is.
On the other hand, the fact that out-of-town stores are increasing in popularity can bring a greater deal of shortcomings which do not only have certain detrimental affects to human health but also degrading one nation’s economy in a long term. In fact, the rising of people’s demand for long distance travel contributes to an increase of cars sold in this day and age. Thus, it leads to series of devastating consequences to the air quality and human health when more and more pollutants emitted from car engines, which heightens pollution levels in those places. Moreover, the fact that a host of small town-centre shops are going belly up also results in a higher unemployment rate, progressively causing a significant loss for the economy of any country
In conclusion, the above-mentioned facts have outlined the benefits as well as drawbacks of this issue. Since it adversely affects human physical well being and job opportunities, I believe that its disadvantages should be highly considered and taken into account
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...highly considered and taken into account
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, may, moreover, so, therefore, thus, well, in addition, in conclusion, in fact, as a result, as well as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 64.0 41.998997996 152% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1709.0 1615.20841683 106% => OK
No of words: 333.0 315.596192385 106% => OK
Chars per words: 5.13213213213 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.27180144563 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.91279526712 2.80592935109 104% => OK
Unique words: 198.0 176.041082164 112% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.594594594595 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 527.4 506.74238477 104% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 6.0 2.52805611222 237% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 30.0 20.2975951904 148% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 52.0427351413 49.4020404114 105% => OK
Chars per sentence: 155.363636364 106.682146367 146% => OK
Words per sentence: 30.2727272727 20.7667163134 146% => OK
Discourse Markers: 12.3636363636 7.06120827912 175% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.389113430623 0.244688304435 159% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.130404082672 0.084324248473 155% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0906929610384 0.0667982634062 136% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.200050068703 0.151304729494 132% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.111725302155 0.056905535591 196% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.9 13.0946893788 137% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.03 50.2224549098 82% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.0 11.3001002004 133% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.07 12.4159519038 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.49 8.58950901804 110% => OK
difficult_words: 92.0 78.4519038076 117% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 9.78957915832 138% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.0 10.1190380762 138% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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