Nowadays children watch too much TV Why is this happening and what can be done to prevent it

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Nowadays children watch too much TV. Why is this happening, and what can be done to prevent it?

In this day and age, there is an increasing number of children spending too much time watching television. This phenomenon may result from the continuous development of technology and lack of parental care, which can be addressed by timely actions from their parents.

To start with, thanks to technological advancement, the young have more exposure to technical devices. They have more opportunities to access thousands of spine-chilling movies or exciting cartoons, thus gradually becoming addicted to those and spending a majority of their time binge-watching. Besides, due to the fast-paced life, adults are usually occupied with their jobs to earn higher salaries and have chances to get a promotion. Therefore, they have little or no time to be talking and playing with their sons and daughters, which day by day creates a huge gap between them and children have no choice but to be entertained and have fun thanks to movies on the television.

To tackle this problem, interference from parents is indispensable. First of all, adults should monitor their children more closely and only allow them to watch television at an appropriate amount of time. This will not only protect the eyes of youngsters but also prevent them from being addicted to this technical device. What is more, parents should arrange their time methodically and improve their work-life balance so that they can have more time for their sons and daughters to chat and understand them more. Thanks to it, parents can accompany their children to have fun with them through instructive pastimes to enhance the young's social skills as well as become more familiar with their offsprings to share sorrows and happiness in their life.

To conclude, technological change and deprivation of parental care are the primary driving forces behind the aforementioned problem, which can be solved by appropriate involvement and alternation from adults

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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, first, if, may, so, therefore, thus, well, as well as, first of all, to start with, what is more

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 19.0 10.4138276553 182% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 27.0 24.0651302605 112% => OK
Preposition: 49.0 41.998997996 117% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1617.0 1615.20841683 100% => OK
No of words: 306.0 315.596192385 97% => OK
Chars per words: 5.28431372549 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.18244613648 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.90740414229 2.80592935109 104% => OK
Unique words: 171.0 176.041082164 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.558823529412 0.561755894193 99% => OK
syllable_count: 492.3 506.74238477 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 53.6813515106 49.4020404114 109% => OK
Chars per sentence: 134.75 106.682146367 126% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.5 20.7667163134 123% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.66666666667 7.06120827912 137% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.152922647286 0.244688304435 62% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0679940670398 0.084324248473 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0640230938938 0.0667982634062 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.108707798513 0.151304729494 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0682834192128 0.056905535591 120% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.2 13.0946893788 124% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 46.1 50.2224549098 92% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.0 11.3001002004 115% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.64 12.4159519038 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.75 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 75.0 78.4519038076 96% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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