Topic: People continue to recommit crimes even after being penalized for their wrongdoings.
Why do you think this happens? How can crime be stopped?
Crime is one of the biggest problems that occurs in our daily life. The cycle of illegal actions keeps repeated by ones who have been punshied before. There are certain reasons and solutions to solve this problem.
First of all, why do offenders continue to recommit crimes? Who had served time in jail after being released usually being unfairly treated. They usually have a hard time rejoining the society and starting over their life due to discriminations, judgements, hatreds from other people, from their acquaintances, or even their loved ones, which makes them feel a range of anger, isolation. Those feelings become bigger over time and finally they snap, recommit crime as the results. Secondly, after being punished, their illegal actions were written in their profiles, which makes them have a hard time finding a job. Since businesses and companies are not always willing to provide someone with criminal records an opportunity to secure a position at their place Having no work means no money, that’s why they have to do everything in order to survive, including illegal actions.
Due to those reasons, to prevent the cycle from repeating itself, we should have proper solutions. According to research, the main reasons that cause corruption in the first place are poorness and lack of education. That’s why if we want to reduce the amount of criminals from the beginning we should provide every kid with a chance to study and raise their awareness of crime prevention, as well as the importance of following the rules. Another method to overcome this situation is to improve the after-care services. For example, we should let the offenders do psychological, psychiatric tests , put on GPS devices for the first 6 month before releasing them back to society to ensure that they wouldn’t cause harm to others. We should also give them an actual opportunity to return to their normal life by providing them with a job, place to sleep or at least food, to be sure that they won’t have a reason to commit crime again. And finally, we should meet with their relatives, try to calm them down, or talk them out of hatred so they would be more supportive to the felon and help them reunite with the community.
In conclusion, people keep on committing crime due to the discriminations that they have been suffering. In order to decrease the number of reoffences we need to open our hearts, really give them a chance to start over.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 596, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...ders do psychological, psychiatric tests , put on GPS devices for the first 6 mont...
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Line 3, column 634, Rule ID: CD_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun 'month' seems to be countable, so consider using: 'months'.
Suggestion: months
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, finally, first, if, really, second, secondly, so, well, at least, for example, in conclusion, as well as, first of all, in the first place
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 46.0 24.0651302605 191% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 70.0 41.998997996 167% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2036.0 1615.20841683 126% => OK
No of words: 414.0 315.596192385 131% => OK
Chars per words: 4.91787439614 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.51076378781 4.20363070211 107% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.61122558514 2.80592935109 93% => OK
Unique words: 232.0 176.041082164 132% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.56038647343 0.561755894193 100% => OK
syllable_count: 630.9 506.74238477 125% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 66.592296481 49.4020404114 135% => OK
Chars per sentence: 113.111111111 106.682146367 106% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.0 20.7667163134 111% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.0 7.06120827912 113% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 11.0 3.9879759519 276% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.21281111626 0.244688304435 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0734671150778 0.084324248473 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0631748686015 0.0667982634062 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.115529361862 0.151304729494 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0664884663921 0.056905535591 117% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.2 13.0946893788 101% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 56.59 50.2224549098 113% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.55 12.4159519038 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.67 8.58950901804 101% => OK
difficult_words: 102.0 78.4519038076 130% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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