Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
At universities and colleges, sports and social activities are just as important as classes and libraries and should receive equal financial support.
Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
Some people believe that at universities and colleges, extra-curricular activities are just as important as classes and libraries and should receive equal Financial support. However, in my opinion, at universities and colleges, cardinal importance should be given to the classes and libraries and should be provided more financial support than sports and social activities for the following three reasons.
First of all, the primary purpose of the establishment of a university or college is to provide academic education. In order to fulfill its primary objective, it must produce adroit writers, researchers, teachers, and scientists. Which cannot be fulfilled if there are not the best classes and libraries available in the universities. As the prompt suggests, when the spots and social activities are provided equal financial support, it is possible that the financial support for the classes and libraries will be inadequate. Eventually, it weakens the primary objectives of the Universities and Colleges.
Second of all, in modern society, the students can have sports and social activities in their locality, however, they cannot get university classes and an academic library. So university sports and activities might not be important for them. In such a case, the investment in sports and social activities is simply a waste.
Third of all, all the students in a university or college may not be interested in sports and social activities, nevertheless, they might be interested only in academic research and classes. So, providing equal financial support to sports, social, and activities and libraries, classes don't hold water.
In conclusion, I don't agree with the prompt which suggests that at universities and colleges, sports and social activities are just as important as classes and libraries, and should receive equal financial support.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, however, if, may, nevertheless, second, so, third, in conclusion, first of all, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 15.1003584229 93% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 9.8082437276 122% => OK
Conjunction : 26.0 13.8261648746 188% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 11.0286738351 54% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 13.0 43.0788530466 30% => OK
Preposition: 25.0 52.1666666667 48% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 4.0 8.0752688172 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1587.0 1977.66487455 80% => OK
No of words: 285.0 407.700716846 70% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.56842105263 4.8611393121 115% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.10876417139 4.48103885553 92% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.05461520548 2.67179642975 114% => OK
Unique words: 130.0 212.727598566 61% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.456140350877 0.524837075471 87% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 492.3 618.680645161 80% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.51630824373 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.59856630824 63% => OK
Article: 3.0 3.08781362007 97% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.86738351254 161% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.94265232975 121% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 20.6003584229 63% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.1344086022 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 53.14210045 48.9658058833 109% => OK
Chars per sentence: 122.076923077 100.406767564 122% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.9230769231 20.6045352989 106% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.69230769231 5.45110844103 141% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.5376344086 36% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 11.8709677419 51% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.85842293907 130% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.88709677419 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.440351589672 0.236089414692 187% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.173349812011 0.076458572812 227% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.135691815819 0.0737576698707 184% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.290891745084 0.150856017488 193% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.118716381641 0.0645574589148 184% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.8 11.7677419355 134% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.7 58.1214874552 72% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 6.10430107527 183% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 10.1575268817 125% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.03 10.9000537634 138% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.11 8.01818996416 101% => OK
difficult_words: 62.0 86.8835125448 71% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 10.002688172 120% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.0537634409 103% => OK
text_standard: 16.0 10.247311828 156% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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